TPO-33 - Independent Writing Task Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?When teachers assign projects on which students must work together, the students learn much more effectively than when they are asked to work alone on projects.Use spe

One of the crucial abilities of successful people is to relate people well. The group project encourages the skill to interact with people. Even though there are some arguments on whether to learn with the group is efficient than learn alone or not, I believe people benefited more from the group project.

Above all, working as a group is the best way to get much information in a little amount of time. Because as a team member, people only study one section of the project which takes considerably less time than working on the whole project by themselves. Also, after studying their section, they exchange their understanding that is the great practice of public speaking. From my personal experience, when a teacher gives a team project, I likely to create a team with the people who have their own opinion because it is interesting to work with people who have their own unique perspective and personality. Moreover, during the group project, I learn more than the subject of the work, I learn from others' and it is very useful and effective option to spend my time rather than surf through the internet.

Another reason is, if a person works on a project alone, it is tiring and requires much time from an individual. Because the project requires a lot of energy from them, people faint a lot which influences harmfully to the result. On the other hand, during a group project, team members encourage each other when they struggling and having a hard time. I think the group members give motivation to each other that is the vital element which create an exceptional team. For example, nowadays, most companies try to work as a little group because it is the best way to work and improve each individual at the same time. Furthermore, most schools in my country teach the lesson that depends on the group of students because it is the most engaging and interesting way for both students and the teachers to sustain themselves.

All in all, the group project is the win-win situation for the people who take part of it. Also, the pros of working together on a work outweigh the cons of it.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, moreover, so, well, for example, i think, on the whole, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 9.8082437276 0% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 43.0788530466 63% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 52.1666666667 94% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1737.0 1977.66487455 88% => OK
No of words: 368.0 407.700716846 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.72010869565 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37987740619 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52437169324 2.67179642975 94% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 212.727598566 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.48097826087 0.524837075471 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 533.7 618.680645161 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.772711056 48.9658058833 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.5625 100.406767564 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0 20.6045352989 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 5.45110844103 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.215510146955 0.236089414692 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0753322192752 0.076458572812 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0439272571195 0.0737576698707 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131195327639 0.150856017488 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0428061080603 0.0645574589148 66% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 11.7677419355 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 58.1214874552 97% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.39 10.9000537634 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.82 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 86.8835125448 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:

para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.

So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:

reasons == advantages or

reasons == disadvantages

for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.


Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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