TPO 35: Agree or disagree? In twenty years, there will be fewer cars than today.
Automation, the crucial trend during last decades has changed our lives dramatically. One of the most using technology equipped with automation is car. They have been developed since nineteen century in different types, sizes and applications. Undoubtedly, cars are vehicles which life is impossible without them. The growth of car production will never stop because of some indisputable facts such as, population growth, economic benefits and easing transportation.
The first fact that contributes in car increase is the population growth. As they are more people, there will be need for more public and private transportation. Thus, undoubtedly, cars will be produced in more rate. Inspite of air pollution made by cars, there are new projects working on green or hybrid cars which produce very lower pollution. This new generation of cars which will be a revolution in car industry, is completely compatible with nature.
The second fact that gaurantees presence of cars in more volume is the financial benefit earned by producing cars. Governments and private companies relating to car industry earn more than billion dollars every year. This huge advantage encourages producers to plan for novel products in more quantities, employ professional engineers to design cars with more competitive aspects. Not only the producers, but also service provider firms and stations gain remarkable profit through car industry who perform their best to achieve more in this money-maker industry.
The third fact illustrates the convenience cars have made in transportation. Although public transportation like bus and subway are available in cities, people tend to use their own cars because they feel comfortable in their private vehicle, specially, in developing countries where there are not enough public transportation for everyone. In such countries people should wait long time in an over- crowded area for vehicle and spend very long time on the way to reach to their destination.
In conclusion, in twenty years, there will be even more cars than today as raise in population, financial advantages and convenience transportation. In order to avoid pollution made by petrol, hybrid and electronic cars should be available in a reasonable price for people to buy.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 193, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'century' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'centuries'.
Suggestion: centuries
...They have been developed since nineteen century in different types, sizes and applicati...
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Line 3, column 189, Rule ID: NODT_DOZEN[1]
Message: Use simply: 'a billion'.
Suggestion: a billion
...relating to car industry earn more than billion dollars every year. This huge advantage...
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Line 5, column 150, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...antages and convenience transportation. In order to avoid pollution made by petrol...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, second, so, third, thus, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 43.0788530466 32% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 52.1666666667 90% => OK
Nominalization: 20.0 8.0752688172 248% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1918.0 1977.66487455 97% => OK
No of words: 352.0 407.700716846 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.44886363636 4.8611393121 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33147354134 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99894523469 2.67179642975 112% => OK
Unique words: 210.0 212.727598566 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.596590909091 0.524837075471 114% => OK
syllable_count: 600.3 618.680645161 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.59856630824 31% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.5500530397 48.9658058833 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.947368421 100.406767564 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5263157895 20.6045352989 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.63157894737 5.45110844103 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.88709677419 184% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.211332160871 0.236089414692 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0738625528912 0.076458572812 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0704938382503 0.0737576698707 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129369356312 0.150856017488 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0780785993856 0.0645574589148 121% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 11.7677419355 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 58.1214874552 77% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.33 10.9000537634 131% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.06 8.01818996416 113% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 86.8835125448 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.247311828 137% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.