TPO 39 - Independent task - Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?In the past it was easier to identify what type of career or job would lead to a secure, successful future.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

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TPO 39 - Independent task - Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?In the past it was easier to identify what type of career or job would lead to a secure, successful future.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

In recent years, the whole world has been changing enormously at the speed of light with the advent of new ideas and concepts. Furthermore, working conditions are being altered rapidly which rely heavily on new technology achievements, insurance, and new rules. Therefore, when it comes to my position, by weighing up the pros and cons, I deeply believe that advanced technology facilitates every single task and everything has been done based on strict rules which caused workers to be more convenient than they used to be for three reasons which I will explore in the following.
First and foremost, the main reason why I hold this idea is that the biggest plus point the today's businesses have vis a vis the past is insurance. Insurance plays a pivotal role to secure your financial success throughout your lifetime. It provides financial protection for you and the people you care about. If faced with an unexpected illness, unemployment, disability, or even death, insurance gives you options to cover your family’s ongoing living expenses and can help you build up a safe zone for your family while it protects and grows the assets you can then pass on to your heirs. Beneficial insurance, retirement insurance as a case in point, helps workers who become old to stop working and get every month salary.
On the other hand, another paramount reason that must be mentioned here is that companies and workers are obliged to follow the strict rules for their contracts and actions. In addition, as employers have to pay workers salary on time and fairly, workers have to be on time and committed at work. Thus, both groups have this possibility to pursue their rights through Legal authorities.
last but not least, in the past men had to follow their family jobs and also women had to work at home because of lack of opportunity and information. Thanks to the Internet everyone has the chance to seek his or her dream job through the Internet. Besides, people could share their resume and experience in social media which is really practical and lets employers and companies easily find them. For an illustration, my brother is a talented person in computer programming and always share his innovative programs on the Internet and once a credit company called him for offering a contract to work for them.
In conclusion, according to the aforementioned reasons, I absolutely disagree with this sentence and I think that as working become more lawful and insurance is compulsory for everyone and the chance of using the Internet have a harbinger of far better times to come for work

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
In recent years, the whole world has bee...
^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 410, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[4]
Message: The pronoun 'you' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'option'
Suggestion: option
...ity, or even death, insurance gives you options to cover your family's ongoing liv...
^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 213, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'workers'' or 'worker's'?
Suggestion: workers'; worker's
.... In addition, as employers have to pay workers salary on time and fairly, workers have...
^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 388, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...their rights through Legal authorities. last but not least, in the past men had ...
^^^^^^
Line 4, column 2, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Last
...rights through Legal authorities. last but not least, in the past men had to f...
^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, furthermore, if, really, so, then, therefore, thus, while, i think, in addition, in conclusion, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 26.0 13.8261648746 188% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 43.0788530466 91% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 52.1666666667 104% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.0752688172 173% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2163.0 1977.66487455 109% => OK
No of words: 437.0 407.700716846 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.94965675057 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.57214883401 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69644850375 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 253.0 212.727598566 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.578947368421 0.524837075471 110% => OK
syllable_count: 679.5 618.680645161 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.1344086022 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 72.1175256092 48.9658058833 147% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.1875 100.406767564 135% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.3125 20.6045352989 133% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.75 5.45110844103 161% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0968647224042 0.236089414692 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0313753204429 0.076458572812 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0308262251481 0.0737576698707 42% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0477519871645 0.150856017488 32% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0345945162296 0.0645574589148 54% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 11.7677419355 132% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 58.1214874552 76% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 10.1575268817 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.73 10.9000537634 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.91 8.01818996416 111% => OK
difficult_words: 109.0 86.8835125448 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 10.002688172 140% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.0537634409 127% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.247311828 137% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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