TPO 39 - Independent taskDo you agree or disagree with the following statement?In the past it was easier to identify what type of career or job would lead to a secure, successful future.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
We live in a competitive world in which job plays important roles in an individual's life. nowadays, people are seeking exceptional skill to distinguish themselves from others for finding higher position. However, intense competition make it more difficult for job applicant to catch a secure and high salary job than past. I personally believe it was easier in the past to gain fruitful life through suitable job. The following reasons will aptly elucidate my viewpoint.
First and foremost, the growth of population led to increase in demand of job and create a competition among job applicants. Accordingly, the competitors must elaborate their skills to fulfill the employer's expectations. However, in the past the number of job applicant were relatively fitted with available jobs. A classic example is my uncle. He is industrial engineer as I am, but he simple found proper job twenty years ago. However, I am not able to find a simple one.
Additionally, technological developments create a vast area of knowledge which did not exist in the past. Therefore, although it contributes to job opportunities, it requires developing special and technical skills which is arduous for every one to become professional in it. For example, in the past one teacher thought all areas to students. While, todays teachers are tailored to the specific fields.
Finally, it is true that there are more career than past, but people should be trained to identify them. It is no guarantee that every educated person correctly find her own interest because of the complex way they confront and many people would get lost in this way.
In conclusion, presence of technology put difficulties and pressure for today's job applicants. So, I think find a job which led to a secure and successful life is more difficult than past.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 73, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'individuals'' or 'individual's'?
Suggestion: individuals'; individual's
...n which job plays important roles in an individuals life. nowadays, people are seeking exce...
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Line 1, column 91, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Nowadays
...important roles in an individuals life. nowadays, people are seeking exceptional skill t...
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Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...r, I am not able to find a simple one. Additionally, technological developments...
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Line 5, column 345, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... teacher thought all areas to students. While, todays teachers are tailored to the sp...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, but, finally, first, however, if, so, therefore, while, as to, for example, i think, in conclusion, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 43.0788530466 56% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 52.1666666667 77% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1525.0 1977.66487455 77% => OK
No of words: 297.0 407.700716846 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13468013468 4.8611393121 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15134772569 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95080917172 2.67179642975 110% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 212.727598566 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.622895622896 0.524837075471 119% => OK
syllable_count: 479.7 618.680645161 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.3886053408 48.9658058833 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.2631578947 100.406767564 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.6315789474 20.6045352989 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.47368421053 5.45110844103 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.150110147999 0.236089414692 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0455575970158 0.076458572812 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0345863063263 0.0737576698707 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0794127583473 0.150856017488 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0228529013516 0.0645574589148 35% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 11.7677419355 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 58.1214874552 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 10.9000537634 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.95 8.01818996416 112% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 86.8835125448 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.