Nowadays, it is commonly accepted that todays because of advantage in managing the educational programs and the fitness of this plans with the availability of jobs in the most of developed or predevelopment societies, having a prediction for the possibility of success in future life are easier than it was in the past. Contrary, to this popular beliefs there are still those who argue that today because of presence of a lot of number of academic graduated people finding a good job are very harder than it was in the past and sometimes one job are more needed than others so the determining what type of jobs would be lead to a secure, successful in the future are very problematic. I, to a great extent, disagree with this idea that Today prediction of what kind of jobs lead to success is more difficult than it was in the past.
First and foremost, Thanks from social researchers and total programs managers in most of the governments.Today, the number of people who arrive at the universities are roughly parallel with job positions. For example, when I arrived at bachelor degree, the number of students was about 30 person in our field. But, in the present year, I know that the number of students that accepted in this field decreased to half.Because the managers subscribed that this decline is necessary to maintain the availability of job and labors. On the other hand, the number of students in the biology increased because of the same reason.
On another significant fact, that should be taken into the consideration is that Today, because of accessibility to a lot of job resources on the internet on other public networks. All of the members of society can explore about job condition in each region and several predicted information about the future change in the job condition. Therefore, young people through attention to this kind of information will be able to have better and more acquire choices about their special goals.
Finally, yet importantly, today most of the people are aware of the impact of precise in their decisions for their major pursuing aim. Now, most of the young people try to find their favorite field during high school to prevent from wasting time and energy in the incorrect choices and after some year rebound to the started point.
On the basis of reasons that mentioned above, I am convinced that now governments managing prepares more calm and secure condition to choose the future job for young people than past. Because of planning based on scientific approaches and availability of more information databases for people to make the correct decision about their favorite future job.
- TPO 40 60
- TPO 45 3
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- TPO-47 - Independent Writing Task Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?It is important to know about events happening around the world, even if it is unlikely that they will affect your daily life. 70
- One of the best ways that parents can help their teenage children prepare for adult life is to encourage them take a part time job 76
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 124, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...educational programs and the fitness of this plans with the availability of jobs in ...
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Line 2, column 106, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Today
...ams managers in most of the governments.Today, the number of people who arrive at the...
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Line 2, column 290, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'person' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'people', 'persons'.
Suggestion: people; persons
...ee, the number of students was about 30 person in our field. But, in the present year,...
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Line 2, column 418, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Because
...ccepted in this field decreased to half.Because the managers subscribed that this decli...
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Line 3, column 181, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: All the
... the internet on other public networks. All of the members of society can explore about jo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, if, so, still, therefore, for example, kind of, on the other hand, to a great extent
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 43.0788530466 70% => OK
Preposition: 88.0 52.1666666667 169% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.0752688172 149% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2194.0 1977.66487455 111% => OK
No of words: 446.0 407.700716846 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.91928251121 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.5955099915 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75439281958 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 218.0 212.727598566 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.488789237668 0.524837075471 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 702.0 618.680645161 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 20.1344086022 154% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 72.0931936554 48.9658058833 147% => OK
Chars per sentence: 156.714285714 100.406767564 156% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.8571428571 20.6045352989 155% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.5 5.45110844103 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.141052598886 0.236089414692 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0536900010252 0.076458572812 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0620703455435 0.0737576698707 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0717252624377 0.150856017488 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0771255106141 0.0645574589148 119% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.7 11.7677419355 150% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.01 58.1214874552 69% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 10.1575268817 152% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.85 10.9000537634 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.93 8.01818996416 111% => OK
difficult_words: 106.0 86.8835125448 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 29.0 10.002688172 290% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.0537634409 143% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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