In this set of materials, the reading passage discusses that journey to Mars need to overcome some serious problems which nowadays we cannot fix them, and was shared three of these problems. While in the listening the professor casts doubt on what was presented in the text and believes that travel to Mars would be definitely challenging, but scientists have been proposed several solutions for these problems.
First of all, in the text, it is clearly mentioned that travel to Mars is a very long trip and providing enough food and other supplies would be a big challenge. However, the professor claims that we can use the hydroponic technique for growing crops on water which need very fewer space rather than soil. In addition, we can recycle this water and use it as drinking water. Moreover, the growing plants would absorb CO2 and produced fresh air in the spacecraft.
In addition, the professor disagrees with this idea that the presence of people in the zero-gravity environment on Mars produced health problems that cannot avoid. She says that today astronauts spend a long time on space on zero-gravity and this condition did not create serious health damage to them. Astronauts can through regular exercise decrease the rate of losing muscle mass, and by consuming calcium, they can reduce the speed of losing bone density.
Finally, in the text, it is stated that the astronauts would be exposed to the very dangerous solar radiation. The professor subscribes that sun occasionally produce those particular dangerous radiations and we can use some instruments to monitor radiation and astronauts do their activities in the shielded portion until the dangerous radiation pass from other parts.
- TPO 42 60
- TPO 49 Independent Writing Task Do you agree or disagree with the following statement The ability to maintain friendships with a small number of people over a long period of time is more important for happiness than the ability to make many new friends 63
- TPO 45- In the past, young people depended too much on their parents to make decisions for them; today young people are better able to make decisions about their own 60
- Do agree or disagree? when teachers assign projects on which students must work together, the students learn much more effectively than when they are asked to work alone on projects. 73
- Workers are more satisfied when they have many different types of tasks to do during the workday than when they do similar tasks all day long.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer 75
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, however, moreover, so, while, in addition, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.4613686534 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 5.04856512141 257% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 11.0 7.30242825607 151% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 12.0772626932 91% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 22.412803532 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 30.3222958057 109% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 5.01324503311 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1437.0 1373.03311258 105% => OK
No of words: 279.0 270.72406181 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.15053763441 5.08290768461 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08696624509 4.04702891845 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66315238431 2.5805825403 103% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 145.348785872 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.573476702509 0.540411800872 106% => OK
syllable_count: 431.1 419.366225166 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 3.25607064018 154% => OK
Article: 5.0 8.23620309051 61% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.51434878587 198% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 2.5761589404 194% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 13.0662251656 84% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 21.2450331126 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.7368329891 49.2860985944 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.636363636 110.228320801 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.3636363636 21.698381199 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.90909090909 7.06452816374 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 4.19205298013 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 4.33554083885 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 4.45695364238 157% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.27373068433 23% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0693543244731 0.272083759551 25% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0252327990272 0.0996497079465 25% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0280885062533 0.0662205650399 42% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0416372162111 0.162205337803 26% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0286608479406 0.0443174109184 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.3589403974 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 53.8541721854 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.0289183223 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.89 12.2367328918 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.89 8.42419426049 106% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 63.6247240618 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 17.0 10.7273730684 158% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.498013245 114% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.2008830022 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 3.33333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 30
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