I believe that teachers are more appreciated now, due to high value of being educated. Also, teachers are more knowledgeable than before. Besides, nowadays educators play a vital role in prosperity of a society. Thus, I strongly disagree with the statement.
In beginning, teachers are more appreciated by society than before due to high value of education. In the past, most children followed their parents career. Being educated wasn't important so much. However today, it is more essential for people. If someone wants to find a better job, he needs to be educated. If someone wants to be sociable in the society, he has to know how to write or read. This is why I think that educators are more valued by society now.
In addition, educators are more knowledgeable than before. As the technology progresses, teachers have to do a lot of researches in order to be up-to-date with these changes. In the past, technology wasn't advanced like today and most education was limited to its basic form. However, today with advancing technology and internet most educators enable to get the latest methods of education and use them in order to train children.
Furthermore, teachers play a vital role in a society. In my opinion, educators are the most important people in a society, because they will push the society toward prosperity. Most successful doctors and managements were a school-children one day and it was their teacher's tasks to make them talented and successful. Hence, I believe that teacher are more important today.
In conclusion, one of the most important career in every society is teaching. Although teaching was important in the past, I believe that teachers are more appreciated by society today, because people are more aware of high value of being educated. In addition, in my opinion teaching becomes to a hard task and educators need to be more knowledgeable. Moreover, teachers play a vital role in prosperity of a society.
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- TPO-06 - Independent Writing Task Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?Life today is easier and more comfortable than it was when your grandparents were children.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 3
- TPO-34 - Independent Writing Task Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?Educating children is a more difficult task today than it was in the past because they spend so much time on cell phone, online games, and social networking Web site.U 61
- TPO-41 - Independent Writing Task Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?Teachers were more appreciated and valued by society in the past than they are nowadays.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 60
- TPO-48 - Integrated Writing Task In recent years, many frog species around the world have declined in numbers or even gone extinct due to changes in their environment. These population declines and extinctions have serious consequences for the ecosystems 85
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'besides', 'furthermore', 'hence', 'however', 'if', 'moreover', 'so', 'thus', 'as to', 'i think', 'in addition', 'in conclusion', 'in my opinion']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.216802168022 0.229887763892 94% => OK
Verbs: 0.168021680217 0.158761421928 106% => OK
Adjectives: 0.105691056911 0.0866891130778 122% => OK
Adverbs: 0.070460704607 0.046263068375 152% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0460704607046 0.0685040099705 67% => OK
Prepositions: 0.130081300813 0.118717715034 110% => OK
Participles: 0.0325203252033 0.0351676179071 92% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.89315265177 2.67179642975 108% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0406504065041 0.0309702414327 131% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00188951952338 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0650406504065 0.0887237588012 73% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.00271002710027 0.0209618222197 13% => Some modal verbs wanted.
WH_determiners: 0.00542005420054 0.0139019557991 39% => Some subClauses wanted starting by 'Which, Who, What, Whom, Whose.....'
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1948.0 2387.08602151 82% => OK
No of words: 324.0 408.028673835 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.01234567901 5.86048508987 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24264068712 4.48200974243 95% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.351851851852 0.338922669872 104% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.311728395062 0.251872472559 124% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.237654320988 0.174417080927 136% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.145061728395 0.112833075102 129% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89315265177 2.67179642975 108% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 212.727598566 71% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.469135802469 0.524397521467 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 46.9830898138 59.2087087015 79% => OK
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6684587814 111% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0869565217 20.5533526081 69% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.6673880581 48.84282405 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.6956521739 120.699889404 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.0869565217 20.5533526081 69% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.608695652174 0.644075263715 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.5376344086 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.54480286738 54% => OK
Readability: 45.2597960279 45.7405998639 99% => OK
Elegance: 1.33333333333 1.45489161554 92% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.374108684656 0.300154397459 125% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0920140080066 0.103427244359 89% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.119609468681 0.0752933317313 159% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.458680255102 0.497263757937 92% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.159874175145 0.151897553556 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.128744749176 0.114077575197 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0571634763794 0.0781384742642 73% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.37959860381 0.336927656856 113% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0630795382588 0.067059652881 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.253066487764 0.210909579961 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00873853761107 0.0618886996521 14% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8870967742 109% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.86379928315 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.91756272401 122% => OK
Positive topic words: 12.0 8.42114695341 142% => OK
Negative topic words: 3.0 2.4623655914 122% => OK
Neutral topic words: 5.0 2.75985663082 181% => OK
Total topic words: 20.0 13.6433691756 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.