Teachers were more appreciated and valued by society in the past than they are nowadays.
Undoubtedly, people have always appreciated their teachers during history. As we all know, teachers have been doing a great job for people, but some factors such as technology, changed every thing. People specially students are more independent nowadays. Consequently they do not need a teacher that much. In my view, many factors are effected on this behavior changes.
First and foremost, knowledge was rare in the past. People didn't like to study that much in the past, because there were a few universities. Also, nobody cared about knowledge in the past. Most people were trying to make money for survive, so they didn't pay attention to expand science.
Furthermore, studying is changed today. Most students use computers and i pods to read something. Additionally, they almost use some online materials. Students are independent these days. During last years, many universities provide online courses. These online courses will have some valid certifications, so students do not need to be in touch with teachers. For instance, my sister- in-law used to teach many classes in the Irvine university. After those changes in universities that made them online, she told us: I have not seen any students during six month. These kinds of changes are harmful for the relationship between students and teachers.
Last but not least, people were more polite in the past. During last decades people learned to be impolite and say anything that they want. It is a kind of danger for humankind. I read an article in New York Times about this matter. Some scientist found out that some comedy movies have changed people's manners during last years.
To sum up, many factors are effected on human behaviors, but some of those factors are obvious to anybody that has a direct affect on people.
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Essay evaluation report
flaws:
Avg. Sentence Length: 12.48 21.0
Always add a blank line between paragraphs.
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Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 22 in 30
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 25 15
No. of Words: 312 350
No. of Characters: 1516 1500
No. of Different Words: 182 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.203 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.859 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.496 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 108 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 75 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 47 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 25 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 12.48 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 5.434 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.48 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.282 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.282 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.075 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 1 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 255, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Consequently,
...students are more independent nowadays. Consequently they do not need a teacher that much. I...
^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 59, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: didn't
... knowledge was rare in the past. People didnt like to study that much in the past, be...
^^^^^
Line 3, column 248, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: didn't
...ying to make money for survive, so they didnt pay attention to expand science. Furt...
^^^^^
Line 4, column 75, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[1]
Message: The pronoun 'i' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'pod'
Suggestion: pod
...oday. Most students use computers and i pods to read something. Additionally, they a...
^^^^
Line 4, column 559, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'month' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'months'.
Suggestion: months
...I have not seen any students during six month. These kinds of changes are harmful fo...
^^^^^
Line 4, column 592, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ng six month. These kinds of changes are harmful for the relationship between stu...
^^
Line 6, column 125, Rule ID: AFFECT_EFFECT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'effect'?
Suggestion: effect
...re obvious to anybody that has a direct affect on people.
^^^^^^^^^
Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'consequently', 'first', 'furthermore', 'if', 'so', 'for instance', 'kind of', 'such as', 'in my view', 'to sum up']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.24011299435 0.229887763892 104% => OK
Verbs: 0.169491525424 0.158761421928 107% => OK
Adjectives: 0.104519774011 0.0866891130778 121% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0480225988701 0.046263068375 104% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0423728813559 0.0685040099705 62% => OK
Prepositions: 0.118644067797 0.118717715034 100% => OK
Participles: 0.0338983050847 0.0351676179071 96% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.60995452893 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0254237288136 0.0309702414327 82% => OK
Particles: 0.00564971751412 0.00188951952338 299% => OK
Determiners: 0.0847457627119 0.0887237588012 96% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.00282485875706 0.0209618222197 13% => Some modal verbs wanted.
WH_determiners: 0.00564971751412 0.0139019557991 41% => Some subClauses wanted starting by 'Which, Who, What, Whom, Whose.....'
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1880.0 2387.08602151 79% => OK
No of words: 310.0 408.028673835 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.06451612903 5.86048508987 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19604776685 4.48200974243 94% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.367741935484 0.338922669872 109% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.258064516129 0.251872472559 102% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.164516129032 0.174417080927 94% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.1 0.112833075102 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60995452893 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 212.727598566 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.58064516129 0.524397521467 111% => OK
Word variations: 63.3609315677 59.2087087015 107% => OK
How many sentences: 25.0 20.6684587814 121% => OK
Sentence length: 12.4 20.5533526081 60% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.3674743324 48.84282405 58% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.2 120.699889404 62% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.4 20.5533526081 60% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.48 0.644075263715 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.5376344086 132% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.54480286738 126% => OK
Readability: 38.2064516129 45.7405998639 84% => OK
Elegance: 1.51086956522 1.45489161554 104% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.292249648307 0.300154397459 97% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0575887962824 0.103427244359 56% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0591311650036 0.0752933317313 79% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.436549577925 0.497263757937 88% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.204040743465 0.151897553556 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0958014885924 0.114077575197 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.108740678189 0.0781384742642 139% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.157666520945 0.336927656856 47% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0468823980245 0.067059652881 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.205368451969 0.210909579961 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.164343496826 0.0618886996521 266% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8870967742 59% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.86379928315 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 15.0 4.91756272401 305% => Less neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 5.0 8.42114695341 59% => OK
Negative topic words: 2.0 2.4623655914 81% => OK
Neutral topic words: 12.0 2.75985663082 435% => Less neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 19.0 13.6433691756 139% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 71.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.5 Out of 30
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