Whether our society respect and appreciate teacher or not, is a controversial debate. However in my country, teachers in the past are much more respected than in current days.
To begin with, people could hardly be educated in the past. First, only aristocracy could be educated since they did not need to work for living, millions of subordinates work for them via agriculture or special skilled, such as craftsmen or artists. Then only some ordinary males could be educated, females were still not eligible for education. At that time, teachers were scarce and respected since most people were not capable of reading, and they appreciated those teachers for teaching them knowledge. Eventually, all human beings with equal rights for education could go to school. By the time, teachers were still respectable due to lack of teacher but abundant students. With fewer teachers teach their students, most students see their teachers as hero and they all appreciated for this opportunities for learning. Therefore, teachers were valued and respected in the past. However, government established more and more schools on every region and trained sufficient teachers for teaching, the value of teacher became worthless gradually.
Moreover, few people were qualified for teacher training. There were few teacher training programs or schools in the past. With low educated rate and difficult qualified tests, the competition was really harsh. Hence, few people could be able to pass the test and became qualified teachers. Those qualified teachers were respected at that time. Nevertheless, government started to establish more teacher training school, and modified the qualified test as even easier than before. Thus, more and more teacher appears, and more teachers devalue them.
Finally, teacher’s salaries respond to its respect by society. Based on the annual decrease of teacher’s salaries, teachers are gradually not valued since other careers makes considerable profits than being a teacher. Take my parents for example, my mother taught for 40 years, and she said that our government removes teaching budgets year by year. Therefore, her salaries diminish accordingly. However, our government starts to put emphasis on engineering field. And my father is an engineer with the annual increased budgets by our government. With the financial support, his company enters to its peak and my father also got promotion for lifting his revenues. Based on the salary of every career, we know our society gradually regard teachers as not valuable.
Consequently, teachers nowadays are less appreciated and less valued by society than they were in the past.
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Discourse Markers used:
['accordingly', 'also', 'but', 'consequently', 'finally', 'first', 'hence', 'however', 'if', 'moreover', 'nevertheless', 'really', 'so', 'still', 'then', 'therefore', 'thus', 'for example', 'such as', 'to begin with']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.241164241164 0.229887763892 105% => OK
Verbs: 0.147609147609 0.158761421928 93% => OK
Adjectives: 0.10395010395 0.0866891130778 120% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0727650727651 0.046263068375 157% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0561330561331 0.0685040099705 82% => OK
Prepositions: 0.116424116424 0.118717715034 98% => OK
Participles: 0.043659043659 0.0351676179071 124% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.75330704175 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Infinitives: 0.018711018711 0.0309702414327 60% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00188951952338 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0561330561331 0.0887237588012 63% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.010395010395 0.0209618222197 50% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0 0.0139019557991 0% => Some subClauses wanted starting by 'Which, Who, What, Whom, Whose.....'
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2662.0 2387.08602151 112% => OK
No of words: 415.0 408.028673835 102% => OK
Chars per words: 6.41445783133 5.86048508987 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.51348521516 4.48200974243 101% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.426506024096 0.338922669872 126% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.349397590361 0.251872472559 139% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.257831325301 0.174417080927 148% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.146987951807 0.112833075102 130% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75330704175 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 220.0 212.727598566 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.530120481928 0.524397521467 101% => OK
Word variations: 60.2239056712 59.2087087015 102% => OK
How many sentences: 27.0 20.6684587814 131% => OK
Sentence length: 15.3703703704 20.5533526081 75% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.6650702097 48.84282405 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.5925925926 120.699889404 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.3703703704 20.5533526081 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.740740740741 0.644075263715 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.5376344086 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.54480286738 36% => OK
Readability: 50.3101294065 45.7405998639 110% => OK
Elegance: 1.45112781955 1.45489161554 100% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.367796021808 0.300154397459 123% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.102671981921 0.103427244359 99% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0886948382456 0.0752933317313 118% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.433610958069 0.497263757937 87% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.150547915288 0.151897553556 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.125523091808 0.114077575197 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0891340348924 0.0781384742642 114% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.233685424108 0.336927656856 69% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.094012180826 0.067059652881 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.269263748393 0.210909579961 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0757789402024 0.0618886996521 122% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8870967742 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.86379928315 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.91756272401 203% => Less neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 12.0 8.42114695341 142% => OK
Negative topic words: 3.0 2.4623655914 122% => OK
Neutral topic words: 7.0 2.75985663082 254% => OK
Total topic words: 22.0 13.6433691756 161% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 71.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.5 Out of 30
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.