We all know that teachers play an important role in helping students gain knowledge and experiences, with the fast develop of technology, people can learn knowledge in many different ways instead of listening from a teacher's lecture, such as from Internet or television. So that some people may think that teachers were more valuable in the past than the present, however, I personally disagree with this statement, and there are some reasons to support my view.
First, nowadays, education is more important than the past. This is because people live in the present require more skills than the past time, for example, people need to understand how to use computer to fulfil their tasks more effective. In order to keep the pace with this rapidly changing society, people are supposed to study constantly. Most of us learn those knowledge and skills from schools, as a consequence, we can claim that teachers is essential in our study process. Obviously, teachers are high valued and appreciated in the society.
Furthermore, becoming a teacher is more difficult than the past in our modern society. At the past time, it does not take too much effort for an individual to become a teacher, for instance, most of my primary school teachers were not graduated from universities, some of them only had high school degree. However, today almost all of the teachers should have a college degree from education area, hence modern teachers are more competitive than the past days, so that they are more valuable.
We have to admit that some people may think nowadays people can access to knowledge more easily than the past, many people can study efficiently by themselves. But we should consider the fact that even if you choose study online instead of study in a traditional classroom, you still being teaching by someone else, so that teacher remains important and crucial in modern life.
In conclusion, we can safely say that teachers are more valuable and are more appreciated than the past, not only because education plays an important role in modern life, but also being a teacher in today's world requires more effort and training.
- TPO-41 - Integrated Writing Task Burning coal in power plants produces a waste product called coal ash, a material that contains small amounts of potentially harmful chemicals Environmentalists in the United States are concerned about the damage such harm 73
- TPO-43 - Independent Writing Task Imagine that you are in a classroom or a meeting. The teacher or the meeting leader says something incorrect In your opinion, which of the following is the best thing to do?-Interrupt and correct the mistake right away-Wa 73
- TPO-48 - Independent Writing Task Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?Because modern life is very complex, it is essential for young people to have the ability to plan and organize. 81
- TPO-42 - Independent Writing Task Workers are more satisfied when they have many different types of tasks to do during the workday than when they do similar tasks all day long.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 61
- TPO-42 - Independent Writing Task Workers are more satisfied when they have many different types of tasks to do during the workday than when they do similar tasks all day long.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 86
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 169, Rule ID: NUMEROUS_DIFFERENT[1]
Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
...chnology, people can learn knowledge in many different ways instead of listening from a teache...
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Line 3, column 133, Rule ID: PAST_TIME[1]
Message: Did you mean 'pastime'?
Suggestion: pastime
...he present require more skills than the past time, for example, people need to understand...
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Line 3, column 361, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this knowledge' or 'those knowledges'?
Suggestion: this knowledge; those knowledges
...d to study constantly. Most of us learn those knowledge and skills from schools, as a consequen...
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Line 5, column 95, Rule ID: PAST_TIME[1]
Message: Did you mean 'pastime'?
Suggestion: pastime
... the past in our modern society. At the past time, it does not take too much effort for a...
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Line 5, column 329, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
...gh school degree. However, today almost all of the teachers should have a college degree f...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'first', 'furthermore', 'hence', 'however', 'if', 'may', 'so', 'still', 'for example', 'for instance', 'in conclusion', 'such as']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.211055276382 0.229887763892 92% => OK
Verbs: 0.140703517588 0.158761421928 89% => OK
Adjectives: 0.105527638191 0.0866891130778 122% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0829145728643 0.046263068375 179% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0452261306533 0.0685040099705 66% => OK
Prepositions: 0.145728643216 0.118717715034 123% => OK
Participles: 0.0276381909548 0.0351676179071 79% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.59101067441 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0226130653266 0.0309702414327 73% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00188951952338 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0879396984925 0.0887237588012 99% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0226130653266 0.0209618222197 108% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00251256281407 0.0139019557991 18% => Some subClauses wanted starting by 'Which, Who, What, Whom, Whose.....'
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2142.0 2387.08602151 90% => OK
No of words: 357.0 408.028673835 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.0 5.86048508987 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34677393335 4.48200974243 97% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.352941176471 0.338922669872 104% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.263305322129 0.251872472559 105% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.207282913165 0.174417080927 119% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.114845938375 0.112833075102 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59101067441 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 212.727598566 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.501400560224 0.524397521467 96% => OK
Word variations: 52.9283456643 59.2087087015 89% => OK
How many sentences: 13.0 20.6684587814 63% => OK
Sentence length: 27.4615384615 20.5533526081 134% => OK
Sentence length SD: 65.8605304219 48.84282405 135% => OK
Chars per sentence: 164.769230769 120.699889404 137% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.4615384615 20.5533526081 134% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.07692307692 0.644075263715 167% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.5376344086 110% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.54480286738 90% => OK
Readability: 53.7920706744 45.7405998639 118% => OK
Elegance: 1.42990654206 1.45489161554 98% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.381617622288 0.300154397459 127% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.132439831564 0.103427244359 128% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.058383065311 0.0752933317313 78% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.601879659173 0.497263757937 121% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.170626172681 0.151897553556 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.182020315581 0.114077575197 160% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0800042990592 0.0781384742642 102% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.299889078226 0.336927656856 89% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0838065525906 0.067059652881 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.246482088818 0.210909579961 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0535245474504 0.0618886996521 86% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8870967742 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.86379928315 26% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.91756272401 61% => OK
Positive topic words: 9.0 8.42114695341 107% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 2.4623655914 41% => OK
Neutral topic words: 3.0 2.75985663082 109% => OK
Total topic words: 13.0 13.6433691756 95% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.