Along with parents, teacher play a pivotal role for healthy upbringing of the children and development in the child career. Do the value of teacher are now days less appreciated by the society or are they are regarded a mediocre nowadays? Teacher, in my opinion, are regarded less important than past days as increase in their number, deterioration of their moral values and plunge in their fervor may be the reason for such happening.
Our grandparents have to go more a long expedition which may take more than months for only one sole purpose- Studying. My grandfather is used saying that teacher, on those days, were very few, even few in big universities such as Hindu Banaras University. So when students or the parents had a chance to meet teacher or professor, it meant very pleasant moment for them. They used to try basically everything to make them happy.Because my grandfather used to visit the teacher occasionally, he, for instance, said that it very excited when he got chance to be with his teacher. He argue with us that we don't respect teacher, because we see almost everyday when we are in school. It is like banal to see a teacher which may cause decrease in their value.
As we know that idealist teachers are very few now. Nowadays, most of teacher are money oriented rather than knowledge oriented, which cause impairment on child studying. In Nepal, most of the teacher teach carelessly so that most of the student beseech teacher to provide tuition fee, an dissipating activity for the purpose of money. This case was such prevalent that prompts government to proscribe any tuition because tuition fee was raised dramatically, hindering poor children from quality knowledge. As a consequence, there was a stigma on teacher character which lead them to be ignoble in society.
The teacher in past used to concentrate conscientiously on every child and they used to enjoy their teaching profession, which made them so respectful in the past. On the other hand, teacher nowadays are teaching only for their sake. They teach as what is in the textbook without focusing whether the children have grasp the knowledge or not. Such difference in their behavior also cause less appreciation of their worth in present.
Finally, due to aforementioned reasons, I believe that the teacher are less respected in present world. Increase in their number, lack of the ethics and fervor in them are the compelling reason for their decrease.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'a more long'?
Suggestion: a more long
...ppening. Our grandparents have to go more a long expedition which may take more than mon...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Because
...basically everything to make them happy.Because my grandfather used to visit the teache...
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Message: The pronoun 'He' must be used with a third-person verb: 'argues'.
Suggestion: argues
...e got chance to be with his teacher. He argue with us that we dont respect teacher, b...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...h his teacher. He argue with us that we dont respect teacher, because we see almost ...
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Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
... respect teacher, because we see almost everyday when we are in school. It is like banal...
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Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...h may cause decrease in their value. As we know that idealist teachers are very...
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun now seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'little now'.
Suggestion: little now
...we know that idealist teachers are very few now. Nowadays, most of teacher are money or...
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Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...beseech teacher to provide tuition fee, an dissipating activity for the purpose of...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e of money. This case was such prevalent that prompts government to proscribe any...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, if, may, so, for instance, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 15.1003584229 132% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.0286738351 136% => OK
Pronoun: 44.0 43.0788530466 102% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 52.1666666667 104% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.0752688172 149% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2051.0 1977.66487455 104% => OK
No of words: 412.0 407.700716846 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.97815533981 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.50530610838 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75153557415 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 218.0 212.727598566 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.529126213592 0.524837075471 101% => OK
syllable_count: 630.9 618.680645161 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.994623655914 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.8121840647 48.9658058833 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.55 100.406767564 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6 20.6045352989 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.15 5.45110844103 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.5376344086 163% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.160416816472 0.236089414692 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0530502255189 0.076458572812 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0406915855761 0.0737576698707 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.092806928353 0.150856017488 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0441117655794 0.0645574589148 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 11.7677419355 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 58.1214874552 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 10.9000537634 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.12 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 86.8835125448 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24 Out of 30
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