The dominance of human beings over other species on the earth in large part relies on the evolvement of civilization, which is mostly contributed by numerous teachers. However, some people thought that paying more attention on celebrities like businessmen and politicians, nowadays people did not admire teachers as much as in the past, which I highly disagree with.
The first reason that comes into my mind is that with the increasing importance of education, people appreciate teachers more. It is clear that to have a more competitive edge over their peers, the only way for young people is to attend a college for further study, where students can learn the state-of-the-art skills and advanced technologies. Devoting their time and energy in their work and helping students accomplish their assignments in both correct and efficient ways, it is impossible that students disrespect these unselfish teachers. In China, if a student who graduates from a college and receives a satisfying offer from a top-tier firm, his or her family will invite the teachers for a sumptuous dinner to express their gratefulness.
Furthermore, people are overwhelmed by a plethora of media where we can always see teachers with different characteristics. For example, a talk show can be home to humorous teachers adept at talking jokes in their class, a singing competition is a fascinating stage for teachers to show their talent in the area of music. Undoubtedly, some amazing facets of teachers which are not exposed to students and their parents are shown in these TV programs. Besides, we can easily find in the news channels some stories which focus on teachers’ personal life rather than their working performance. The audience can be easily moved by those teachers who lighted up the world on their ordinary positions.
Higher income is also a reason that cannot be ignored. As a result of the combination of the increasing population, the fierce competition in the job market and the importance of education, there are considerable academic colleges and professional training schools in our society, which provide numerous positions and unprecedentedly high salary for not only teachers who have tens of years of experience but also students who just graduate from normal colleges. It is not difficult to imagine that having a higher salary than other jobs, teachers are greatly valued by us.
Opposing the view that teachers are less appreciated now, from the reasons aforementioned, I believe that they are more appreciated indeed due to the significance of education, the influence of media and their increasing income.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, furthermore, however, if, so, for example, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 20.0 11.0286738351 181% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 43.0788530466 84% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 52.1666666667 107% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.0752688172 223% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2216.0 1977.66487455 112% => OK
No of words: 421.0 407.700716846 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.26365795724 4.8611393121 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.52971130743 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00848209334 2.67179642975 113% => OK
Unique words: 233.0 212.727598566 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.553444180523 0.524837075471 105% => OK
syllable_count: 689.4 618.680645161 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 8.0 3.08781362007 259% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.1344086022 139% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 78.7272083421 48.9658058833 161% => OK
Chars per sentence: 147.733333333 100.406767564 147% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.0666666667 20.6045352989 136% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.4 5.45110844103 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.125833243722 0.236089414692 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0516166387247 0.076458572812 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.047642297214 0.0737576698707 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0808874577766 0.150856017488 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0260758476416 0.0645574589148 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.4 11.7677419355 148% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 58.1214874552 74% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 10.1575268817 140% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.52 10.9000537634 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.19 8.01818996416 115% => OK
difficult_words: 111.0 86.8835125448 128% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 10.002688172 145% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.0537634409 131% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.247311828 137% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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