As time passes and people get more developed, they are getting more aware of how education of children is valuable. Importance of upbringing new generation and children is not an ambiguous issue these days, so people tend to find the best methods to teach and grow their children, in and so on, teachers are respectful and appreciated and valued by society as well as before or even more than before on account of reasons, three of which are as follows:
The most important reason is that, according to researches in psychology conducted in recent decades, the most important period of life, which human personality is shaped, is childhood. Children after reaching the age to attend school, spend huge portion of their time with their teacher, learning different things from them. So teachers have great influence in the most important period of life of children and any delinquency from them can result in terrible problems in educating and upbringing new generation. For example, many researches have been conducted with psychologists which illustrate, almost everyone of criminals, have had problems during their childhood, which some of them were related to schools and teachers.
Second reason is that, applying standard and scientific methods of teaching different courses to children, have been proved to be so important to create an efficient education system, which caused teaching to turn into a hard job and takes experts and well skilled teachers to undertake this responsibility. For example, in the past, knowing how to teach students the alphabet, to read or write could be enough for being a teacher, but nowadays, different methods have been suggested for each one of them and teachers are expected to have ability to utilize these methods to maximize the efficiency of teaching process.
In summary, with all this taken into account, it has been proven that teaching is one of the most important roles in our societies, and can have great influence in shaping of personality and abilities of children and next generation. People are amazingly cognizant of the mentioned fact, as result, nowadays, teachers are appreciated and valued by society even more than they were in the past.
- TPO-44 - Integrated Writing Task In 1957 a European silver coin dating to the eleventh century was discovered at a Native American archaeological site in the state of Maine in the United States. Many people believed the coin had been originally brought to 70
- TPO-41 - Independent Writing Task Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?Teachers were more appreciated and valued by society in the past than they are nowadays.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 60
- TPO-41 - Independent Writing Task Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?Teachers were more appreciated and valued by society in the past than they are nowadays.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 70
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The rules that societies today expect young people to follow and obey are too strict. use specific reasons and examples to support your idea. 76
- Do you agree or disagree with this statement? It is more important for governments to spend money to improve internet access than to improve public transportation. use specific reasons and examples to support your idea. 76
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, second, so, well, for example, in summary, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 15.1003584229 146% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 13.8261648746 145% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 43.0788530466 44% => OK
Preposition: 60.0 52.1666666667 115% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1857.0 1977.66487455 94% => OK
No of words: 358.0 407.700716846 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.18715083799 4.8611393121 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34981470047 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74131095341 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 212.727598566 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.508379888268 0.524837075471 97% => OK
syllable_count: 568.8 618.680645161 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 9.59856630824 21% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 20.6003584229 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 39.0 20.1344086022 194% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 118.855758624 48.9658058833 243% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 206.333333333 100.406767564 205% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 39.7777777778 20.6045352989 193% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.88888888889 5.45110844103 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.141740789181 0.236089414692 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0745715551207 0.076458572812 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0817760204012 0.0737576698707 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103168338856 0.150856017488 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0537621487869 0.0645574589148 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 22.9 11.7677419355 195% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 31.89 58.1214874552 55% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 18.5 10.1575268817 182% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.41 10.9000537634 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.32 8.01818996416 116% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 86.8835125448 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 28.0 10.002688172 280% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 17.6 10.0537634409 175% => OK
text_standard: 28.0 10.247311828 273% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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