Everyone has their own preference to work, there is no one specific style of working that can implemented on all and can make everyone happy. But is it right to do the same type of work all day long or is it true that people need some change in their work? Some people think that it is good to do same type of work all time as it is quite comfortable. However, I strongly believe that it is mandatory to do variety of tasks for the following reasons.
To begin with, uniformity is boring and it makes a person dull and inactive. It will not be unjust to say that a person needs some kind of motivation to pursue something, a new task will excite a person to do it passionately and if a person is doing the same old thing for long time then she/he will eventually lose interest in it. For example, if an actor is doing same kind of roles in every movie like famous actor Jackie Chan, he used to do the similar kind of movies in the past, in which he used to be a police officer saving a beautiful girl from some vial criminal. Obviously, people got bored seeing those movies and didn’t like them anymore. Finally, he had to bring in change in his movies to attract viewers. Thus, this clearly tells the significance of change.
In addition, doing the same tasks actually hinders the growth of an individual to great extent. When a person is doing something new, it is indeed a kind of challenge for him/her. So, in order to achieve best result, a person will not only work hard but will also use his/her maximum intelligence and creativity. It is proven from various experiments conducted by researchers that human brain works better in difficult situation under pressure. On the other hand, a person’s mind capacity will deteriorate gradually in favorable condition where it doesn’t have to think much. I can recall an incident related to me, I was in a company where my work was confined to just supervising my juniors. I didn’t have much complicated work to do. Over a period of time, I became carefree and unintelligent but when I changed my job and I became the head of the editing department, my intelligence level improved and I became sharp.
To recapitulate, although there are many people who think that workers should not be given different tasks to do as there are more chances of mistakes. I disagree; I think that the Abenefits of this style of working far outweigh any negative repercussions and have advantages for both, workers and company as workers feel happy and content when workers do variety of tasks. Also, company has people that are capable of doing many things and so they will not have to be dependent on just one person for a particular job.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 197, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[4]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'achieve the best'.
Suggestion: achieve the best
... challenge for him her. So, in order to achieve best result, a person will not only work har...
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Line 5, column 760, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...ave much complicated work to do. Over a period of time, I became carefree and unintelligent bu...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, finally, however, if, so, then, thus, for example, i think, in addition, kind of, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 15.1003584229 139% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.0286738351 145% => OK
Pronoun: 53.0 43.0788530466 123% => OK
Preposition: 62.0 52.1666666667 119% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2215.0 1977.66487455 112% => OK
No of words: 486.0 407.700716846 119% => OK
Chars per words: 4.55761316872 4.8611393121 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.69525374022 4.48103885553 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65239107432 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 249.0 212.727598566 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.512345679012 0.524837075471 98% => OK
syllable_count: 723.6 618.680645161 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.59856630824 146% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.994623655914 101% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.8234326166 48.9658058833 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.476190476 100.406767564 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.1428571429 20.6045352989 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.42857142857 5.45110844103 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.212979903227 0.236089414692 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0642344664851 0.076458572812 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0601008233502 0.0737576698707 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140253639443 0.150856017488 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0605834329284 0.0645574589148 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 11.7677419355 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 58.1214874552 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.46 10.9000537634 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.96 8.01818996416 99% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 86.8835125448 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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