There is no doubt that repeat doing the things for a long time is very boring. In order to that I think that doing a variety of tasks is more interested. Someone can consciously weigh the pros and cons of each side. The explanations is going to be as follows.
First of all, I think that the power and energy of human decrease with repeating the same tasks. They feel that they are looks like the automated machine. For example, my mam is a teacher and she began teaching since 1988. My mam always feel very boring and annoyed from her work, as the subjects are the same from thirty years. The government does not provides the schools with the advanced technology to regenerate and improve the educational system. My mam said to me that she has no energy to product more.
Furthermore, the variety of tasks raises the experience and the knowledge very high. For instance, while I was graduated from Faculty of Science, I was supposed to work at my professor's laboratory in the morning. At mid- night, I was helped my mam in writing a social articles as she is a journalist. At the night, I used to work at my dad's company as an accountant. Indeed, I learned a lot about different fields and that's benefits me a lot in my life. For example, I find that is very exciting to study with my daughter the science, math and social subjects.
Finally, the more experience and the more knowledge help the human to be a social person and good talker at any conference or meeting. For example, my dad is a businessman and he works in many fields like the importing and exporting, the synthesizing of preserved food and he owns a big construction company that used to built the huge projects like hospitals and schools and others. Really my dad has got a great experience and knowledge about every thing. I feel so proud when I see him talk with important people or when he be invited in a large conference and festivals to say the word of the party.
In sum, due to aforementioned ground, all folk should bear in mind that a diverse is more profitable for the human as it gives him all the reasons of success and happiness.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 234, Rule ID: AGREEMENT_SENT_START[4]
Message: You should probably use: 'are'.
Suggestion: are
...and cons of each side. The explanations is going to be as follows. First of all...
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Line 3, column 354, Rule ID: DOES_X_HAS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'provide'? As 'do' is already inflected, the verb cannot also be inflected.
Suggestion: provide
...m thirty years. The government does not provides the schools with the advanced technolog...
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Line 3, column 354, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[3]
Message: The verb 'does' requires base form of the verb: 'provide'
Suggestion: provide
...m thirty years. The government does not provides the schools with the advanced technolog...
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Line 5, column 419, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: that's
...earned a lot about different fields and thats benefits me a lot in my life. For examp...
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Line 7, column 528, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'is'.
Suggestion: is
...m talk with important people or when he be invited in a large conference and festi...
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Line 9, column 73, Rule ID: DT_JJ_NO_NOUN[2]
Message: Probably a noun is missing in this part of the sentence.
...ound, all folk should bear in mind that a diverse is more profitable for the human as it...
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Line 9, column 82, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... folk should bear in mind that a diverse is more profitable for the human as it g...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, furthermore, if, look, really, so, while, for example, for instance, i feel, i think, no doubt, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 9.8082437276 20% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 13.8261648746 145% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 43.0 43.0788530466 100% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 52.1666666667 90% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1738.0 1977.66487455 88% => OK
No of words: 387.0 407.700716846 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.49095607235 4.8611393121 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.43534841618 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61765395973 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 212.727598566 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.50645994832 0.524837075471 96% => OK
syllable_count: 542.7 618.680645161 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.3091259623 48.9658058833 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.7619047619 100.406767564 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4285714286 20.6045352989 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.90476190476 5.45110844103 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.115900591011 0.236089414692 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0364129110355 0.076458572812 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0510076807076 0.0737576698707 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0701055753133 0.150856017488 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0364350474291 0.0645574589148 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.9 11.7677419355 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 58.1214874552 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.1575268817 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.76 10.9000537634 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.26 8.01818996416 91% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 86.8835125448 77% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 10.002688172 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.