In this set of materials ,the reading passage suggests three possible solutions to help the birds from being injuries as they cannot have the capability to distinguish between the transparent glass and the open air. However, the professor finds each of the three ideas dubious and skeptical and unlikely to help them and provides some evidence to refute them all.
First of all, the reading passage claims that the one way glass will solve the problem as it transparent only from inside but outside the birds cannot see through the window. On the contrary, the professor refutes that probable solution and he explains that the one way glass reflects a mirror in the outside and the mirror always reflects the light from the sky. So, when the birds see the reflection, they will think that is the sky's reflection and go toward it. Therefore, this idea cannot be a logical solution.
Furthermore, the reading passage mentioned that colorful designs will be promising solution as the drawings and lines will going to fear the birds to fly through it. Also, at the same time the drawings will have many halls allowed the people to see the outside through it. However, the professor opposites this point by saying that the halls between the design will encourage the birds to come and fly through them. Another problem that the drawings will make inside building too dark to the people. Hence, it cannot solve the problem effectively.
Finally, the reading passage asserts that introducing magnetic field will be useful in rejects the birds away from the building as the author claimed that the birds have great ability to sense the magnetic fields and they used it when navigation. In contrast, the professor refutes this point by explaining that the birds use the magnetic fields only when they migrate in the winter from the cold place to the warmer place but, in case of short distances they depend on their eyes. Thus, the magnetic field will not assist the birds.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
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Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
...ge mentioned that colorful designs will be promising solution as the drawings and lines will...
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Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'go'
Suggestion: go
...solution as the drawings and lines will going to fear the birds to fly through it. Al...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...gnetic field will not assist the birds. .
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Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...etic field will not assist the birds. .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, furthermore, hence, however, so, therefore, thus, in contrast, first of all, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 10.4613686534 48% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 5.04856512141 257% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 12.0 7.30242825607 164% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 12.0772626932 108% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 22.412803532 134% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 30.3222958057 142% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.01324503311 140% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1644.0 1373.03311258 120% => OK
No of words: 335.0 270.72406181 124% => OK
Chars per words: 4.90746268657 5.08290768461 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27820116611 4.04702891845 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.31837405883 2.5805825403 90% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 145.348785872 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.477611940299 0.540411800872 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 483.3 419.366225166 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.55342163355 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 3.25607064018 92% => OK
Article: 9.0 8.23620309051 109% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 2.5761589404 194% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 13.0662251656 107% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 21.2450331126 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 65.7374182887 49.2860985944 133% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.428571429 110.228320801 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.9285714286 21.698381199 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.5 7.06452816374 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 4.19205298013 119% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 4.33554083885 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 4.45695364238 90% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.27373068433 70% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.42158692066 0.272083759551 155% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.140513282876 0.0996497079465 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0900585527879 0.0662205650399 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.243639372236 0.162205337803 150% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0412396438505 0.0443174109184 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.3589403974 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 53.8541721854 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.0289183223 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 12.2367328918 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.56 8.42419426049 90% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 63.6247240618 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 10.7273730684 121% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.498013245 107% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.2008830022 71% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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