When we talk about satisfactions, we usually talk about a sense of fulfilment and self-actualisation. Most of us gain those feeling in work, some people feel more satisfied with doing similar tasks all day long, indeed, we have to admit that similar tasks are less challenging, an experienced employee can finish this kind of tasks very quickly. However, I am agreeing with the statement that people feel more satisfied with having different types of tasks to do.
Employees who are used to deal with different types of tasks are more competitive in job market than those only do similar tasks all day long. It is the fact that this kind of job requires employees with different skills, such as the communication skills with others, how to understand some knowledges in a short time and how to organize their schedule efficiently. Obviously, bosses and other team members appreciate employees who have those skills, as a result, these employees will have higher chance to get promotion in their career and receive better salaries than the average. When people gain more profit in their job, they can spend more money on entertainments and buy more things which will improve their life quality, hence they will gain more satisfaction from work.
At most of time, different types of tasks is more challenging than similar tasks, some people may not like taking challenges during their life time, they are afraid of getting out from their comfort zone. But there are some people enjoying facing with challenging in their job, they gain satisfaction from the process of doing different kinds of tasks. For those people, a job with similar tasks is often too boring to them, I would like to introduce myself as a example, as a student major in software engineering, I am going to start my career as a program developer. I have some experiences in web application development, so I choose this area and start my internship in a software company. My task is only use a specific technic to implement other's design, after finished my task before the end of the day, I find there are no other kinds of tasks for me and I have to wait my team member finished their design, otherwise I can not start my work. So I quickly feel bored to this job and leave this company as soon as that project finished. After that, I realized I am not the kind of person who can endure doing similar tasks all day long, as a consequence, I change my job as a research assistance intern in a data mining company, there are different kinds of tasks for me, such as finding data sources on the Internet, using different tools to analysis data and find their pattern in order to cluster them to different categories. Now I feel much more satisfied to my job.
In conclusion, different types of tasks is benefit for employees to enhance their competitive in job market, thus, leading a feeling of fulfillment in their work. And for those kind of people who quickly gets bored with similar tasks, a challenging job offers more kinds of tasks is a better choice towards them.
- TPO-46 - Independent Writing Task Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?The opinions of celebrities, such as famous entertainers and athletes, are more important to younger people than they are to older people.Use specific reasons and exam 66
- TPO-41 - Independent Writing Task Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?Teachers were more appreciated and valued by society in the past than they are nowadays.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 60
- TPO-42 - Independent Writing Task Workers are more satisfied when they have many different types of tasks to do during the workday than when they do similar tasks all day long.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 60
- TPO-42 - Integrated Writing Task Glass is a favored building material for modern architecture, yet it is also very dangerous for wild birds. Because they often cannot distinguish between glass and open air, millions of birds are harmed every year when the 80
- TPO-48 - Independent Writing Task Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?Because modern life is very complex, it is essential for young people to have the ability to plan and organize. 60
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 592, Rule ID: OF_CAUSE[1]
Message: Did you mean 'of course' (=naturally)?
Suggestion: of course
...hings which improve their life quality, of cause they will gain more satisfaction from w...
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'if', 'may', 'so', 'well', 'i feel', 'in conclusion', 'kind of', 'of course']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.235412474849 0.229887763892 102% => OK
Verbs: 0.154929577465 0.158761421928 98% => OK
Adjectives: 0.128772635815 0.0866891130778 149% => OK
Adverbs: 0.046277665996 0.046263068375 100% => OK
Pronouns: 0.056338028169 0.0685040099705 82% => OK
Prepositions: 0.130784708249 0.118717715034 110% => OK
Participles: 0.0160965794769 0.0351676179071 46% => Some participles wanted.
Conjunctions: 2.60221446769 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0281690140845 0.0309702414327 91% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00188951952338 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0684104627767 0.0887237588012 77% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0301810865191 0.0209618222197 144% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0160965794769 0.0139019557991 116% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2645.0 2387.08602151 111% => OK
No of words: 463.0 408.028673835 113% => OK
Chars per words: 5.71274298056 5.86048508987 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.63868890866 4.48200974243 103% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.272138228942 0.338922669872 80% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.205183585313 0.251872472559 81% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.142548596112 0.174417080927 82% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.10151187905 0.112833075102 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60221446769 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 202.0 212.727598566 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.436285097192 0.524397521467 83% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 48.4212136851 59.2087087015 82% => OK
How many sentences: 12.0 20.6684587814 58% => OK
Sentence length: 38.5833333333 20.5533526081 188% => Sentence lengths are too long.
Sentence length SD: 73.9532509991 48.84282405 151% => OK
Chars per sentence: 220.416666667 120.699889404 183% => Less chars per sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 38.5833333333 20.5533526081 188% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 0.75 0.644075263715 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.5376344086 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.54480286738 18% => OK
Readability: 59.1016918647 45.7405998639 129% => OK
Elegance: 1.484375 1.45489161554 102% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.385238040465 0.300154397459 128% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.147456573404 0.103427244359 143% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0690798594912 0.0752933317313 92% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.670980695291 0.497263757937 135% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.15401211014 0.151897553556 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.186554058866 0.114077575197 164% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.070101668084 0.0781384742642 90% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.325090043951 0.336927656856 96% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0998970193541 0.067059652881 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.26595127463 0.210909579961 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0464429330191 0.0618886996521 75% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8870967742 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.86379928315 26% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.91756272401 0% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 11.0 8.42114695341 131% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 2.4623655914 41% => OK
Neutral topic words: 0.0 2.75985663082 0% => More neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 12.0 13.6433691756 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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