By and large, beyond doubt it is stablished that human kind loathes and runs away from the routineness and always has been looking for multifariousness in life, job and in some cases even in their love life. Personally talking I hate getting occupied with the same quotidian occupations. In what follows I will delve into some conspicuous reasons to substitute my point of view.
The first exquisite point to be mentioned is that the efficaciousness of a particular performance highly alleviates when an individual repeats the same task for a quiet long time. Research has demonstrated that doing a monotonous task will have a great influence in our mind and it will have impacts in our body like feeling sleepy, tired and lack of concentration which is the last thing that the employers look for in their workers. So it is axiomatic that they should allocate the duties more attentively and put a significant attention toward this issue.
Another subtle point to be mentioned is that repeating a routing performance bring about the workers dissatisfaction in their jobs and they will soon hate the tedious and dreary situations they experience at work so there wouldn't be any dedication, loyalty and gratefulness toward the job they do. For instance last summer I found a part time job in an office, I was to help the employees do their jobs faster as they were meeting a deadline, owing to I wasn't a permanent worker my tasks was different and it was fun. Dislike my idol, one of my friends on her first day was given a duty which was a huge project and she was to do it alone, after four days of doing the same frustrating job she resigned. In fact working there for me provided me with different knowledge about diverse programs and lots of other experiences along with joyful memories.
Another reason which deserves some words here is that accomplishing a single job with out alternating it often brings out lots of illnesses and sicknesses both mentally and physically. Say my father used to work in a company which required lots of movements from the down to dusk, after a while he end up having knee surgery. The health and salubrious states of the workers should be an obligatory for supervisors and they should sometimes take a glance at the system of their companies or offices to make sure that it is unlikely to lose any of the skilled and trained staff because of the tough working conditions.
Due to the aforementioned conditions substituting tasks for avoiding the dreary is an adequate way for preventing the contingency of further issues. Contemplating all factors and reasons I suppose it is crystal clear that now why I strongly hold this opinion that workers need and prefer various implementations.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 108, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[7]
Message: The adverb 'always' is usually put between 'has' and 'been'.
Suggestion: has always been
... and runs away from the routineness and always has been looking for multifariousness in life, j...
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Line 2, column 342, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... our body like feeling sleepy, tired and lack of concentration which is the last ...
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Line 3, column 94, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'workers'' or 'worker's'?
Suggestion: workers'; worker's
...g a routing performance bring about the workers dissatisfaction in their jobs and they ...
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Line 3, column 223, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: wouldn't
...ations they experience at work so there wouldnt be any dedication, loyalty and grateful...
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Line 3, column 333, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: part-time
... do. For instance last summer I found a part time job in an office, I was to help the emp...
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Line 3, column 454, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: wasn't
...hey were meeting a deadline, owing to I wasnt a permanent worker my tasks was differe...
^^^^^
Line 4, column 82, Rule ID: WITH_OUT[1]
Message: This word is usually written together. Did you mean 'without'?
Suggestion: without
...here is that accomplishing a single job with out alternating it often brings out lots of...
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Line 4, column 298, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'ends'.
Suggestion: ends
...from the down to dusk, after a while he end up having knee surgery. The health and ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, look, so, while, as to, for instance, i suppose, in fact, by and large, in some cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 15.1003584229 139% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 13.8261648746 152% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.0286738351 136% => OK
Pronoun: 51.0 43.0788530466 118% => OK
Preposition: 58.0 52.1666666667 111% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2260.0 1977.66487455 114% => OK
No of words: 467.0 407.700716846 115% => OK
Chars per words: 4.83940042827 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.64867537961 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88696709405 2.67179642975 108% => OK
Unique words: 264.0 212.727598566 124% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.565310492505 0.524837075471 108% => OK
syllable_count: 702.0 618.680645161 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 9.59856630824 10% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 20.1344086022 154% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 62.8879073343 48.9658058833 128% => OK
Chars per sentence: 150.666666667 100.406767564 150% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.1333333333 20.6045352989 151% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.4 5.45110844103 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.5376344086 144% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.181437437825 0.236089414692 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0534998687523 0.076458572812 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0412241992456 0.0737576698707 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0902784654974 0.150856017488 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0600766118828 0.0645574589148 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.9 11.7677419355 144% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.47 58.1214874552 83% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 10.1575268817 140% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.38 10.9000537634 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.86 8.01818996416 110% => OK
difficult_words: 109.0 86.8835125448 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 10.002688172 120% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.0537634409 143% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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