I utterly agree with the concept that people nowadays are less specialized and have more knowledge in wider area with less depth. The superior reasons why I believe this way are, the dominant depression around the world, more distractions and less perseverance as well as the fact that we don't have much help these days and have to deal with everything by our own selves.
First I think that, the depression and bergeoning amount of the joblessness in countries have made people to gain skills in variety of fields instead of specializing in one. The obligations push people to do and perform in jobs that they don't want to. But the increasing amount of the educated people has made it hard to find occupations on the fields that we desire the most. For instance, we have this relative of ours who had studied medicine for nine years and after this long time due to the fact that, he could not find any adequate job offers in hospitals good enought to support his family started working on engineering fields.
Furthermore, the world nowadays has more disteractions than before. We normally are pushed to choose our future majors when we are in high-school but after graduation that we experience real issues and problems start to compare out lives with beautifull sides of others' lives that we see on social media. After a short while the idea that alternation our major may be the solution to our problems gets dominant in our minds. Then, instead of concentrating our energy on our own fields change it with the major of the people we suppose are prosperous and this may happen even more than once. And as a result we end up knowing about variety of the occupations but not enough to get a highprofile job on one or start our own business.
At last, the families in past had huge impact on children and their lives. Families use to be more extended and consequently people get to contribute more on solving and handeling situations. The neccessarity of gaining experience on everything manifasted from the time that independancy from young ages become a consensus. I myself as a university student, now have been working and living alone for more than a year and can totally handel my day to day issues. For example I can cook but I am not that tallented nor that expert to work as a chef.
In conclusion, specializing and dedicating our lives to one particular major requires better job opportunities, more perseverance in our fields and at the end more help from others specialy family. Unfortunrtly the truth is that none of these are available at the current era.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, first, furthermore, if, may, so, then, well, while, for example, for instance, i think, in conclusion, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 22.0 13.8261648746 159% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.0286738351 136% => OK
Pronoun: 53.0 43.0788530466 123% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 67.0 52.1666666667 128% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2128.0 1977.66487455 108% => OK
No of words: 449.0 407.700716846 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.73942093541 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.60321845022 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71557331349 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 235.0 212.727598566 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.523385300668 0.524837075471 100% => OK
syllable_count: 677.7 618.680645161 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 7.0 3.08781362007 227% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.1344086022 119% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.9733069696 48.9658058833 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.222222222 100.406767564 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.9444444444 20.6045352989 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.05555555556 5.45110844103 148% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.5376344086 181% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0696011030037 0.236089414692 29% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0253975207483 0.076458572812 33% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0397957619174 0.0737576698707 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0393250270132 0.150856017488 26% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0332705123588 0.0645574589148 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 11.7677419355 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 58.1214874552 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.51 10.9000537634 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.24 8.01818996416 103% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 86.8835125448 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 10.002688172 140% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.0537634409 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 25.5 Out of 30
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