I utterly disagree with the statement. However, some strongly defend this point of view that children should countinue their parents footsteps and their prosperity is depended whether they listen to their elders experiences. I to some states agree with them but, choosing a ceerer just because of parents in my opinion is absurd. Regarding the diversity ni personalities, the constant change in society in our era and at the end and alternation of the demands in goods and servises I believe that deciding a major and field to start working on should be about what an indivitual wants not about their family history.
I believe we can all agree to the idea that the generations that are being borin now, born in past and will born in future are very different in every way. The constant and hasten developments of technology has brought lots of facilities and other convinance to our lives. although, nowadays we live in rush and deal with lots of pressure in our work environments but our jobs and the things we do are very deifferent than what our parents did. The highly competetive and innoventional environment of these days has made this generation to countinue moving forward and using experiences of our parents and their tips in how they did their jobs won't work. Thus it is better to choose an occupatoin that is new and developoing instead of some old fashion jobs.
The diversity in personalities are absoulutly vivid and obvious even inside a family with kids in same age. Though, perseverance, education and the advocate of family is important in some ones skills but the inner talents and interest of a person is virtually special and is nonechangable. Thus, it is possible that kids won't like their parents jobs which is so likely to happen and even if they did they wouldn't have the slkill to handle the job as well as their parents. For instance my mother is an accountant but my sister hates math and is nowhere near being talented on it. Thus, thinking of becoming an accountant in future is like pure nightmare for her.
Following the cultural changes in society and as a result the generations, people choose very different hobbies and have many different demands for their lives. Thus, the jobs that used to be profitable in pasta now are kind of useless. For example, our aprents used to pay money for a photographer to took their picture and print it for them but nowadays with the extension of the smart phones and cameras people mostly shoot for them sleves and only limited people with limited jobs pay for professional photographers. Thus, choosing a job should be based upon the contemporary demands in the market and the jobs that are more likey and are potentioal to make progress insteade of jobs that were in prestige in past.
Consequently, parents should guide their kids to majors that are the best for them in their own era not the ones they have or they wanted to have. there are lots of superior factors for choosing an occupation but wish of the parents should not be one of them.
- Nowadays, children rely too much on the technology, like computers, smart phone, video games, for fun and entertainment. Playing simpler toys or playing outside with friends would be better for the children's development. 73
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- Modern technology is creating a single world culture. Do you agree or disagree and give reasons and examples 68
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? People benefit more from traveling in their own country than from traveling to foreign countries.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 78
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It is better to have broad knowledge of many academic subjects than to specialize in one specific subject. 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...in society in our era and at the end and alternation of the demands in goods and ...
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Message: Did you mean 'bear' or 'be born'?
Suggestion: bear; be born
... being borin now, born in past and will born in future are very different in every w...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Although
...ties and other convinance to our lives. although, nowadays we live in rush and deal with...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
...s in how they did their jobs wont work. Thus it is better to choose an occupatoin th...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: wouldn't
...ely to happen and even if they did they wouldnt have the slkill to handle the job as we...
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Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
... choose very different hobbies and have many different demands for their lives. Thus, the jobs...
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Message: Did you mean: 'in the past'?
Suggestion: in the past
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Suggestion: There
... ones they have or they wanted to have. there are lots of superior factors for choosi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, however, if, regarding, so, thus, well, for example, for instance, kind of, as a result, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 28.0 15.1003584229 185% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 34.0 13.8261648746 246% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 58.0 43.0788530466 135% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 72.0 52.1666666667 138% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2501.0 1977.66487455 126% => OK
No of words: 527.0 407.700716846 129% => OK
Chars per words: 4.74573055028 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.79129216042 4.48103885553 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64060137457 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 261.0 212.727598566 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.495256166983 0.524837075471 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 785.7 618.680645161 127% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 20.1344086022 129% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 63.0249752082 48.9658058833 129% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.05 100.406767564 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.35 20.6045352989 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.65 5.45110844103 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.5376344086 144% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.362992275484 0.236089414692 154% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0997281413001 0.076458572812 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0713521525144 0.0737576698707 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.196822714221 0.150856017488 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0501460160895 0.0645574589148 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 11.7677419355 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 58.1214874552 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.1575268817 121% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.57 10.9000537634 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.1 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 106.0 86.8835125448 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 10.002688172 140% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.0537634409 123% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.247311828 137% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.