By and large, in today modern society where we live, career plays an important role in people’s life. Since it provides various benefits for a better life. There is a statement that some people believe that workers are more satisfied when they are assigned different tasks than workers who have similar responsibilities. I personally concur with the idea and in the following lines, I will elaborate on my reasons in detail.
Firstly, doing a various task is more enjoyable and prevents workers to get tired. It is crystal clear that human get bored by doing repetitive jobs. Indeed, our nature is in favor of the diversity and new experience. Although an employee would do the same various job every day, it prevents her/him from feels exhausted. For instance, consider a post office clerk who has to organize customer mails and prepare them in order to forward to the destinations. He should pack up the letters and stamps and many other similar affairs all day long. Each day, he wakes up, knowing that there is nothing surprising or challenging in his job. Ultimately, he would get depressed and decides to leave his job that would lead to many personal problems. I have recently seen a psychological program that had conducted an experiment about two different part of clerks, the first group was assigned similar activity every day and the second group was assigned various responsibilities. The scientist wanted to find out what type of jobs simultaneously satisfy workers and improve their efficiency and efficacy. They have reported, the workers with various responsibilities have shown higher satisfaction and efficiency.
Second, workers could improve personal skills by doing the different tasks. When employees are assigned a different task, they have the chance to improve their skills and abilities through various duties. In other words, most careers are associated with various aspects with different challenges. For instance, take a computer program, it involves several phases like extracting requirements of customers, designing the structure, planning the time, programming, testing and so on. Although a computer engineer is not an expert in all skills, she can improve and learn her knowledge about a different aspect of a program by doing these jobs. As a computer engineer, I have a similar experience in my current project. Before the current project, I was just familiar with a programming language and I worked as a computer programmer, while in the recent project I was responsible for both programming and testing, which not only helps me to improve my professional skills but also leads to receiving extra wages.
In conclusion, based on the aforementioned reasons, individuals who are assigned various jobs are more satisfied. Firstly, because they get less tired and fresh up with different activities. Moreover, they improve their professional skills which provide them with a better life in general.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, moreover, second, so, while, as to, for instance, in conclusion, in general, by and large, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 13.8261648746 145% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 43.0 43.0788530466 100% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 52.1666666667 102% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2484.0 1977.66487455 126% => OK
No of words: 471.0 407.700716846 116% => OK
Chars per words: 5.27388535032 4.8611393121 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.65859790218 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93121452779 2.67179642975 110% => OK
Unique words: 262.0 212.727598566 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.556263269639 0.524837075471 106% => OK
syllable_count: 765.9 618.680645161 124% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 16.0 9.59856630824 167% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 8.0 3.51792114695 227% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.6003584229 121% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.5020597734 48.9658058833 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.36 100.406767564 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.84 20.6045352989 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.44 5.45110844103 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.243886233418 0.236089414692 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0680521946497 0.076458572812 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0815157863874 0.0737576698707 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.148621377749 0.150856017488 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0489869039303 0.0645574589148 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 11.7677419355 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 58.1214874552 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 10.9000537634 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.45 8.01818996416 105% => OK
difficult_words: 117.0 86.8835125448 135% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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