By and large, it is established that the relationship between parents and children somehow has direct impacts on the future character of that child. But the concept of spending time with kids is something that has been a great controversy among parents, I strongly believe that the few times that parents should be spending on things that bring happiness, trust and strengthen the relations ship. In the following paragraphs, I will delve into some conspicuous reasons to substitute my point of view on this issue.
To begin with, these days in this sophisticated era that parents are working from down to dusk despite of the importance and the obligatory of spending time with children they do not get to this much. So children are mostly in touch with their friends and school and stuff like that but the weekends or holidays that parents are at home, trying to spend time with their kids they sometimes do not know how to do this and it may cause in destroying the relationship they have with their children. So they should make some amendments and modifications for the proportion of this relation. I believe if the time spent on entertainment and some stuff that would make the child happy should be more than the time that is getting spent on studying but that does not mean that there should not be a time for helping them to concentrate on their homework but the balance should be perfectly maintained.
If the game and they play was chosen propriety, the time that is dedicated for playing, games is a time that a kid is looking forward to it. That time should be spent upon the kids' interests, attachments, and penchants. For instance, if it is most likely to spent on the playing soccer or going out to a park or zoo it should be so. Because this is going to have a tangible influence on the kid and it is going to make it even preferable and better, it somehow makes the trust between them which is the premiere consequence. Moreover, this progress, in parent-children relation is something that makes the family hold on together better and stronger in future and having a prosperous family is something that forms the characterism and the personality of the children. Due to the done research it is now well proved that the more children spend time with parents, the more they will have a strict, well organized and sterling character.
On the other hand, spending time on doing and completing the school homework should be a motivation and incentive for children to initiate and innovate. This time should not appear as a punishment for children because they will hate it and if the parents are involved in this punishment they will hate their parents too and it will have too many disruptive impacts on both the kid and their relationship with parents and it will put their personality in a prosperous situation that can harm them in the future and cause them lots of psychological problems. But in fact, if this time as formerly mentioned gets spent on encouraging them for learning new things with their parents who are kind of their good friends it will arise their interest for studying and they will do as the parents want and expect them to in school and later levels of their education in future.
To put in briefly both of the arguments above are true but none of them are complete, I can neither approve them nor accept them. This world is based upon some intricate counteractions and repercussions and we shall learn from it. Rearing and tending children is a very complex issue and it is mandible for parents to gather enough and adequate knowledge about it.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
briefly, but, if, look, may, moreover, so, then, well, as for, for instance, in brief, in fact, kind of, by and large, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 32.0 15.1003584229 212% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 22.0 9.8082437276 224% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 43.0 13.8261648746 311% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 22.0 11.0286738351 199% => OK
Pronoun: 83.0 43.0788530466 193% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 81.0 52.1666666667 155% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.0752688172 173% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2962.0 1977.66487455 150% => OK
No of words: 629.0 407.700716846 154% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.70906200318 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 5.00798087137 4.48103885553 112% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64478387086 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 264.0 212.727598566 124% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.419713831479 0.524837075471 80% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 890.1 618.680645161 144% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 33.0 20.1344086022 164% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 87.6045951817 48.9658058833 179% => OK
Chars per sentence: 155.894736842 100.406767564 155% => OK
Words per sentence: 33.1052631579 20.6045352989 161% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.94736842105 5.45110844103 146% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.28467171982 0.236089414692 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0958775038759 0.076458572812 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0708508841765 0.0737576698707 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.168210984691 0.150856017488 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0768180224514 0.0645574589148 119% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.3 11.7677419355 147% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.9 58.1214874552 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 10.1575268817 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.63 10.9000537634 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.91 8.01818996416 99% => OK
difficult_words: 105.0 86.8835125448 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 10.002688172 135% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.2 10.0537634409 151% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.247311828 137% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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