Over the past few decades, the decision-making ability has been changed dramatically among people compared to the past days which is utmost important for their future prospective. Some people believe that, youngsters prefer to make to their decision by themselves instead of taking advice from their parents. Although some thinks, young people still take permission from elders before deciding anything in their lives. From my prospective, the former view carries more weight. I take the position on account for the following reasons.
To begin with, education system plays paramount role in children's life. For instance, students are migrating to other places to pursue further education. They must face difficulties there, like adjusting in new environment with strangers and handling everything on themselves without the help from parents. This action would guide them to create strong decision-making ability. Indeed, most of the schools provide personal education classes, where students are taught various lessons on how to face real life difficulties, and students do need to find different solutions by themselves which make them to gain self-confidence. Thus, they can understand the possible outcome after wrong as well as right decisions.
Moreover, People were strictly forced to follow their tradition starting from children school, occupation to their marriage. However, the culture of blindly obeying to their elders have faded away gradually. To add to this, parents have become more liberal, and they like to give freedom to their children. Thus, it helps them to grow as a good analyzer and strong thinker in society.
Further point, with the evolution of technological development, adults are very well equipped with lots of information. The advent of internet provides them an easy access to huge source of knowledge, and it becomes possible to learn almost everything through internet. All in all, with all advancements of technology and internet facility make young generation more independent and confident to take decision on their own.
In a nutshell, I strongly believe that young adults have the capacity to make decisions on their own, even though it should be better to take opinion from their parents as they have more experiences, which would help children to make better future.
- TPO 31- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?Because the world is changing so quickly, people now are less happy or less satisfied with their lives than people were in the past.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 73
- TPO 30Agree/Disagree: It is more enjoyable to have a job where you work only three days a week for long hours than to have a job where you work five days a week for shorter hours. 70
- TPO 41 80
- TPO 36 - Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?For the successful development of a country, it is more important for a government to spend money on the education of very young children (five to ten years old) than to spend money on univers 73
- TPO 34 75
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 158, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[3]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'easy access'.
Suggestion: easy access
...n. The advent of internet provides them an easy access to huge source of knowledge, and it bec...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, moreover, so, still, thus, well, for instance, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 15.1003584229 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 32.0 43.0788530466 74% => OK
Preposition: 66.0 52.1666666667 127% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.0752688172 161% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1957.0 1977.66487455 99% => OK
No of words: 360.0 407.700716846 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.43611111111 4.8611393121 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35587717469 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80028520373 2.67179642975 105% => OK
Unique words: 219.0 212.727598566 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.608333333333 0.524837075471 116% => OK
syllable_count: 594.0 618.680645161 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.5804924028 48.9658058833 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.0 100.406767564 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9473684211 20.6045352989 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.47368421053 5.45110844103 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.337183295511 0.236089414692 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0907884320248 0.076458572812 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0942131937423 0.0737576698707 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.189034935838 0.150856017488 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0894923451576 0.0645574589148 139% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 11.7677419355 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 58.1214874552 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.27 10.9000537634 131% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.96 8.01818996416 112% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 86.8835125448 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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