When it comes to career, the university professor is a noble profession and has a tremendous amount of knowledge to educate the students in the education institution. They play a pivotal role in the education system. Some argue that the university should allocate more money to the professors as they have been playing an important role to educate the students. While others have the opposite idea that professors are not required to pay high salaries. From my perspective, the formal view carries more weight. I take the position on account for the following reasons.
Primarily, working as a professor is not an easy task because they do not work only for certain hours that they are physically present at the university. In addition to that, they may perform various tasks outside the working hours. For instance, the lecturer may give lesion for 90 minutes in the classroom. However, he puts an ample amount of time to prepare for that lecture in order to execute the lecture in a more engaging way to benefit the students. Moreover, they also allocate a huge amount of time in marking the assignments in order to provide valuable feedback to the students which may help the students to prepare for the exams. In some scenario, some educators do extra work at their home instead of spending time with their family which often go unnoticed. Thus, it is important to pay a high salary to the professors who dedicate their many hours to educate the students.
Secondly, educating university students is more difficult compared to high school students. They are enough matured at this age. Sometimes, they do not want to pay attention in the class even though the professor is trying his best to make them understand the topic and, other times, students often go against the professors. Consequently, professors will need to face the negative consequences. Furthermore, they would sacrifice their whole life in teaching their students in order to make their future bright. My own uncle is a compelling example of this. He has been working as a chemistry professor at the same university since he completed his graduation. He will be getting retire this year. He has given his whole life in serving education to the students. Thus, the professor really deserves a high salary because they sacrifice their life in order to make the country strong.
On the other hand, if the educators at the university are not paid well, they might look for the other job to meet the family’s needs. As a result, they may unable to work efficiently in the university which will directly influence the student's performance. In some situation, the lecturer may like to move to the other university where he would get a high salary from the university. Therefore, the native university would lose an experienced educator. Gradually the university may have a lack of experienced staff members which will bring down the university's reputation.
In summation, from all aforementioned reasons, I strongly believe that it is extremely important to pay high salary to the university professors. This is because they spend their career to educate the students so the students can make a bright career, and because they spend their own time for the students, so they deserve that.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, furthermore, however, if, look, may, moreover, really, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, well, while, for instance, in addition, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 9.8082437276 173% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 13.8261648746 22% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 52.0 43.0788530466 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 68.0 52.1666666667 130% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.0752688172 173% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2726.0 1977.66487455 138% => OK
No of words: 545.0 407.700716846 134% => OK
Chars per words: 5.00183486239 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.83169070408 4.48103885553 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77024482234 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 247.0 212.727598566 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.453211009174 0.524837075471 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 876.6 618.680645161 142% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 17.0 9.59856630824 177% => OK
Article: 6.0 3.08781362007 194% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 30.0 20.6003584229 146% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.4075495436 48.9658058833 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.8666666667 100.406767564 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1666666667 20.6045352989 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.13333333333 5.45110844103 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8709677419 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.88709677419 184% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.140724506454 0.236089414692 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0433194268794 0.076458572812 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0376931147642 0.0737576698707 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0949842059503 0.150856017488 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0307194762603 0.0645574589148 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 11.7677419355 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 58.1214874552 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.42 10.9000537634 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.57 8.01818996416 94% => OK
difficult_words: 105.0 86.8835125448 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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