Everyone of us like the entertainer and athletes regardless of age, race, ethnicity, gender and nationality because they are one in million people and their works are really amazing and there is no doubt in that. Among us, the younger generations gives more important for the these people little bit more than the older people. There are several reasons why youngster likes them more.
First of all, earlier technological advancement less when compare with today's level. Because of these technological advancement all the events easily spread to people everywhere in the corner of the world that is incredible. So, younger people easily attracted by actors and sports person. For example, Earlier also there was fans for actors Rajini but his his fans more than billions people in the world because technology spreads his popularity even though he is old now. Fans are putting the actor picture on the international flight. This happens first time in the world history, it shows younger people are more interest towards the entertainers.
Secondly, youngster are taking the sports man as role model which is not happens much in past. For example, Dhoni is Indian team captain who is from Nagpur and all of the youngster following is hair style till today even at college, office, party areas and play grounds which evidence that the younger generation gives more important for the sports persons. And, they are taking matter as their prestige symbol.
Thirdly, even some of us building the temple for the actress it's happening Chennai. People started building the temple for the actress Kushpu who very famous south Indian actress. But, earlier people never did activity that much level while compare with new generation. It is a big proof that confirm, younger are more influenced by the entertainer and athletes.
Finally, the younger generation following their advertisements of the actors or sportsperson. For example, If, Schachin wears Nike shoe for ad then all of youngster buying more Nike shoes earlier it was not like that. These all events evidence that young generation gives more important to the entertainers and athletes than earlier people.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 133, Rule ID: NODT_DOZEN[1]
Message: Use simply: 'a million'.
Suggestion: a million
...and nationality because they are one in million people and their works are really amazi...
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Line 1, column 290, Rule ID: LITTLE_BIT[1]
Message: Reduce redundancy by using 'little' or 'bit'.
Suggestion: little; bit
...ves more important for the these people little bit more than the older people. There are s...
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Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...nt less when compare with todays level. Because of these technological advancement all ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: his
...so there was fans for actors Rajini but his his fans more than billions people in the w...
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...t shows younger people are more interest towards the entertainers. Secondl...
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Message: Did you mean: 'in the past'?
Suggestion: in the past
...as role model which is not happens much in past. For example, Dhoni is Indian team capt...
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...ian team captain who is from Nagpur and all of the youngster following is hair style till ...
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...ople started building the temple for the actress Kushpu who very famous south Ind...
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...rtainer and athletes. Finally, the younger generation following their adver...
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Message: The proper name in singular (Nike) must be used with a third-person verb: 'shoes'.
Suggestion: shoes
...n. For example, If, Schachin wears Nike shoe for ad then all of youngster buying mo...
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...or example, If, Schachin wears Nike shoe for ad then all of youngster buying more...
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...iners and athletes than earlier people.
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'finally', 'first', 'if', 'really', 'second', 'secondly', 'so', 'then', 'third', 'thirdly', 'while', 'even so', 'for example', 'no doubt', 'first of all']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.283505154639 0.229887763892 123% => OK
Verbs: 0.105670103093 0.158761421928 67% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0953608247423 0.0866891130778 110% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0773195876289 0.046263068375 167% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0438144329897 0.0685040099705 64% => OK
Prepositions: 0.126288659794 0.118717715034 106% => OK
Participles: 0.0231958762887 0.0351676179071 66% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.55732800607 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Infinitives: 0.00515463917526 0.0309702414327 17% => Some infinitives wanted.
Particles: 0.0 0.00188951952338 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0953608247423 0.0887237588012 107% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0 0.0209618222197 0% => Some modal verbs wanted.
WH_determiners: 0.020618556701 0.0139019557991 148% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2194.0 2387.08602151 92% => OK
No of words: 350.0 408.028673835 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.26857142857 5.86048508987 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32530772707 4.48200974243 97% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.385714285714 0.338922669872 114% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.277142857143 0.251872472559 110% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.171428571429 0.174417080927 98% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.105714285714 0.112833075102 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55732800607 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 212.727598566 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.537142857143 0.524397521467 102% => OK
Word variations: 58.09434048 59.2087087015 98% => OK
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6684587814 92% => OK
Sentence length: 18.4210526316 20.5533526081 90% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.2096673365 48.84282405 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.473684211 120.699889404 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4210526316 20.5533526081 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.894736842105 0.644075263715 139% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.5376344086 110% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.54480286738 216% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 46.1353383459 45.7405998639 101% => OK
Elegance: 1.90909090909 1.45489161554 131% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.389876439746 0.300154397459 130% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.100183555717 0.103427244359 97% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.088945475156 0.0752933317313 118% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.496230601348 0.497263757937 100% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.146180841687 0.151897553556 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.148922164978 0.114077575197 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0735632018204 0.0781384742642 94% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.312065199238 0.336927656856 93% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.042749613234 0.067059652881 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.258715286399 0.210909579961 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0559981292639 0.0618886996521 90% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8870967742 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.86379928315 26% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.91756272401 142% => OK
Positive topic words: 10.0 8.42114695341 119% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 2.4623655914 41% => OK
Neutral topic words: 3.0 2.75985663082 109% => OK
Total topic words: 14.0 13.6433691756 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 65.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 19.5 Out of 30
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.