What you are trying to know when it's not even my business is intrusive in a certain way. But what is likely to not affect my daily life is something I can experience in the future. It is important to know about the things that happen in the world, as it is said that knowing history tells the future.
First of all, the first reason to support my opinion is, as I said, a lesson to me because it is something I can go through. No one knows what will happen to a person's life, even if I don't experience it and don't influence it.
Because of the possibilities that could be my job, we should learn a lesson from watching events in the world.
Secondly, it is not good manners to be indifferent even if it is not my job. It can lead to neglect and, if I don't want to know, it can bring bad results to me. Even if it doesn't affect my daily life, what if the events need attention? It is wrong to ignore.
Last but not least, it gives you a critical viewpoint.
Man lives with his own values. At this point in time, this value can not be established only in my daily life. It is important to develop the ability to know and think about many events in the world, and it can be a major cause of having the right perspective of values.
Therefore, it is not a good idea to ignore or maintain a casual attitude even if it does not affect my daily life and is rather a remote event.
- TPO-49 - Independent Writing Task Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?The ability to maintain friendships with a small number of people over a long period of time is more important for happiness than the ability to make many new friends 70
- TPO-48 - Independent Writing Task Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?Because modern life is very complex, it is essential for young people to have the ability to plan and organize. 60
- TPO-49 - Independent Writing Task Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?The ability to maintain friendships with a small number of people over a long period of time is more important for happiness than the ability to make many new friends 70
- TPO-47 - Independent Writing Task Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?It is important to know about events happening around the world, even if it is unlikely that they will affect your daily life. 60
- TPO-49 - Independent Writing Task Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?The ability to maintain friendships with a small number of people over a long period of time is more important for happiness than the ability to make many new friends 70
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 161, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'persons'' or 'person's'?
Suggestion: persons'; person's
...ugh. No one knows what will happen to a persons life, even if I dont experience it and ...
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Line 3, column 185, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...ill happen to a persons life, even if I dont experience it and dont influence it. ...
^^^^
Line 3, column 208, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
... life, even if I dont experience it and dont influence it. Because of the possibil...
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Line 6, column 111, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...y job. It can lead to neglect and, if I dont want to know, it can bring bad results ...
^^^^
Line 6, column 173, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
...can bring bad results to me. Even if it doesnt affect my daily life, what if the event...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.0286738351 36% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 41.0 43.0788530466 95% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 52.1666666667 59% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1116.0 1977.66487455 56% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 271.0 407.700716846 66% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.11808118081 4.8611393121 85% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 4.48103885553 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.3158913825 2.67179642975 87% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 212.727598566 63% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.494464944649 0.524837075471 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 356.4 618.680645161 58% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.51630824373 86% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.7094296091 48.9658058833 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.4 100.406767564 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0666666667 20.6045352989 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.06666666667 5.45110844103 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.53405017921 154% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.239631617735 0.236089414692 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0834824372076 0.076458572812 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0626291338419 0.0737576698707 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114310352504 0.150856017488 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0541935339829 0.0645574589148 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.0 11.7677419355 59% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 78.59 58.1214874552 135% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 10.1575268817 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.32 10.9000537634 58% => Coleman_liau_index is low.
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.63 8.01818996416 83% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 86.8835125448 41% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.