Keeping yourself updated with current affairs should be the continuous goal of life. There is no doubt in my mind that many events that happen around the world have nothing to do with our day to day life. However, It is certainly important to keep ourselves abreast with current knowledge. Therefore, I strongly believe that it is definitely a good idea to have the understanding about the events happening around the globe. I feel this way for two main reasons, which I will explain in the following essay.
To begin with, keeping yourself updated helps to broaden our knowledge and increases our intellectual ability. In the modern era, where we have the advanced technology it is very easy to grasp the knowledge about the world around us. In addition to it, having a good understanding of a wide array of events provide us with the meaningful conversation with friends and family. For instance, me and my colleague go for a lunch date every Friday and we talk about various topics happening around the world, even though the topic we discuss has nothing to do with our work or with our personal life but such topics give us a meaningful conversation, which we enjoy and feels intellectual. Without the sound knowledge of events happening around the world, we would have spent our lunch date discussing banel office gossips.
Furthermore, knowing about the things happening around us helps us to be aware of the surroundings, about good and bad things taking place and how to keep us safe from the negative circumstances. Recently, I saw on the T.V that criminal gangs are coming up with innovative ideas to break into someone's houses. I felt such kind of information is very useful to protect ourselves from any ill-effects that might take place. My uncle's experience is a compelling example of what I mean. A few years back, my uncle was out of town for some important work and his family was alone in the town. A criminal gang, who was looking for such kind of opportunity entered into my uncle's house and took all his belongings when my aunt was fast asleep. Next morning, my aunt realized the loss, but it was too late. When I went to her place, I informed her that the information about the gang is telecasted daily on the news channel, but she said she did not pay attention as she felt it was not important. This example shows it is important to be aware of the things happening as it keeps us safe and alert.
All in all, I believe it is very important to have knowledge about everything. This is because it broadens our thought-process and also protect from evil things.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 222, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: V
...circumstances. Recently, I saw on the T.V that criminal gangs are coming up with ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, look, so, therefore, as to, for instance, i feel, i mean, in addition, kind of, no doubt, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 15.1003584229 132% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 66.0 43.0788530466 153% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 62.0 52.1666666667 119% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2148.0 1977.66487455 109% => OK
No of words: 455.0 407.700716846 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.72087912088 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.61852021839 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67598460606 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 233.0 212.727598566 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.512087912088 0.524837075471 98% => OK
syllable_count: 663.3 618.680645161 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.59856630824 146% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.5805693334 48.9658058833 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.285714286 100.406767564 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6666666667 20.6045352989 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.66666666667 5.45110844103 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.85842293907 207% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.196664895781 0.236089414692 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0575020388118 0.076458572812 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.048544901562 0.0737576698707 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122641419821 0.150856017488 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0714648927297 0.0645574589148 111% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 11.7677419355 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 58.1214874552 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.1 10.9000537634 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.38 8.01818996416 92% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 86.8835125448 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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