Today's life is more complex than before. in the past, each event in the part of the world wasn't important to others. Consequently, people didn't need to understand about them. Nevertheless, unfortunately, today's daily event of each county affect other domestic people. Hence, in my view, I think that it is important to know about the happenings of all around the world.in following, two reasons will be rendered.
First and foremost is that countries nowadays have lots of communication with each other like trading different objects or political communication in order to enhance their homeland. Because each event can influence such this communication, therefore, people need to know about that because some of them can impact on people indirectly. For instance, when one country put some rules in order to prohibit petroleum from a country which has a source of fuel, it can influence the economic situation of both countries and due to compensating it, they have to increase or decrease the price of some objects what people should bear it not the government.
Second, in the world, some part of events is not only contributed to the specific country but also all others should have attention on that which means that each person should be aware on it and care about it and try to decrease the harmful effect of that. for instance, what even is today more popular is terrorist. They come from the middle east but now they are spread in Europe too. one reason for this distribution is that Europian people didn't have any attention on them and when they drown in it that the time was too late. it shows that how important be aware of whats going on in the world.
In summary, maybe I talk about bad events which are happened all around the world. But, such this events clearly show that why different parts of the world can affect on each other and people should have attention on them because as communication has increased among people, in a parallel each event indirectly, can affect person's life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, hence, if, may, nevertheless, second, so, therefore, as to, for instance, i think, in summary, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.0286738351 136% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 43.0788530466 77% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 52.1666666667 105% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.0752688172 186% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1668.0 1977.66487455 84% => OK
No of words: 344.0 407.700716846 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.8488372093 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30665032142 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59700913802 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 212.727598566 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.508720930233 0.524837075471 97% => OK
syllable_count: 512.1 618.680645161 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 81.8345213763 48.9658058833 167% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.2 100.406767564 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.9333333333 20.6045352989 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.13333333333 5.45110844103 168% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.5376344086 181% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.188414721384 0.236089414692 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0741659859914 0.076458572812 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0520270400484 0.0737576698707 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135734955077 0.150856017488 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0692486059923 0.0645574589148 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 11.7677419355 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 58.1214874552 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.15 10.9000537634 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.62 8.01818996416 95% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 86.8835125448 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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