We experience complexity of the modern life in our everyday life. I totally agree that as juveniles, we should be prepared to encounter with every possible situation by being self-organized and make accurate plans. I would provide some reasons to support my idea.
To begin with, in the last decades, technology is growing by extremely fast pace. We need to make ourselves adopted for the changes, which demands accurate schedule and plan. Young people need to learn more about the Internet and new communication ways, which costs them time. Learning about new technology, one can be more ahead of others in his career which helps him to get promotion faster. Talking from my own experience, I spend some time to learn a programming software to create virtual reality tour while my colleagues were hanging around. Next day, when my employer found about it asked me to create some tours and he raised my salary. Planning my time effectively I could get more salary. There is a say that "time is money" and I strongly believe it.
To put forward my idea further, I would add that by emerging social media such as the Instagram, and Facebook, it is easy to lose so much time. Personally, I get easily distracted by the social media which makes me to waste so much time visiting irrelevant contents. At the end of day, I have gained nothing and I just notice that I have still too much work to do and there is no time left to take care of them. So, I strongly believe that by planning for my everyday life and getting stick to it, I will be able to manage my tasks better. I should add that, recently I have installed an application on my phone termed "Forest" which helps me to decline the distraction by phone.
Furthermore, economy in the last years has been unstable. I believe that everywhere in the world, people have experienced recessions which adversely affected their job and consequently their career. To protect ourselves and our family from the negative economic situation we need to work hard which demands a great well-disciplined mindset. Additionally, the market is very competitive nowadays and we need to compete with old experts and giant companies on the opportunities. Being self-disciplined we can overcome the situation and win the opportunities.
To conclude, I strongly believe that young people need to plan their time effectively to make best use of their time. Time is the most precious gift we have as human being.
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?In the past, young people depended too much on their parents to make decisions for them; today young people are better able to make decisions about their own lives. 80
- TOEFL TPO 46 - Integrated Writing Task 80
- TPO 41 - integrated writing 78
- TPO-42 - Integrated Writing Task 83
- TPO 44 - Integrated Writing Task 80
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...vide some reasons to support my idea. To begin with, in the last decades, tech...
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Line 5, column 90, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[4]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'make the best'.
Suggestion: make the best
... need to plan their time effectively to make best use of their time. Time is the most pre...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, furthermore, if, so, still, well, while, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.0286738351 145% => OK
Pronoun: 61.0 43.0788530466 142% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 51.0 52.1666666667 98% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2046.0 1977.66487455 103% => OK
No of words: 421.0 407.700716846 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.85985748219 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.52971130743 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90044275898 2.67179642975 109% => OK
Unique words: 231.0 212.727598566 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.548693586698 0.524837075471 105% => OK
syllable_count: 657.9 618.680645161 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 9.59856630824 156% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.2539262987 48.9658058833 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.9565217391 100.406767564 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3043478261 20.6045352989 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.34782608696 5.45110844103 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8709677419 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.11703128626 0.236089414692 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0351477115876 0.076458572812 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0398740209006 0.0737576698707 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0712834531885 0.150856017488 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0221526009493 0.0645574589148 34% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 11.7677419355 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 58.1214874552 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 10.9000537634 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.17 8.01818996416 102% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 86.8835125448 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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