TPO 48 Independent Writing Task Do you agree or disagree with the following statement Because modern life is very complex it is essential for young people to have the ability to plan and organize
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 32, Rule ID: NUMEROUS_DIFFERENT[1]
Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
Modern society have evolved in many different ways and created a new world with techn...
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Line 4, column 681, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[3]
Message: The verb 'did' requires base form of the verb: 'have'
Suggestion: have
...ing for the college, he did not frankly had an interest in engineering, however, he...
^^^
Line 6, column 839, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
...ea, financial scams and hacking happens everyday and people lost enormous amount of mone...
^^^^^^^^
Line 6, column 950, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'become'.
Suggestion: become
...ion to their passwords and I was almost became a victim of those financial scams as we...
^^^^^^
Line 6, column 1207, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'did' requires the base form of the verb: 'change'
Suggestion: change
.... Since majority of the victims did not changed or updated their password regularly, th...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, frankly, however, if, moreover, regarding, so, still, therefore, thus, well, while, after all, for example, for instance, such as
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 15.1003584229 126% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 36.0 13.8261648746 260% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 43.0788530466 97% => OK
Preposition: 98.0 52.1666666667 188% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.0752688172 198% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3340.0 1977.66487455 169% => OK
No of words: 639.0 407.700716846 157% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.2269170579 4.8611393121 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 5.02776782673 4.48103885553 112% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72717086694 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 326.0 212.727598566 153% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.510172143975 0.524837075471 97% => OK
syllable_count: 1053.0 618.680645161 170% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 12.0 4.94265232975 243% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6003584229 117% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 20.1344086022 129% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 66.5642964025 48.9658058833 136% => OK
Chars per sentence: 139.166666667 100.406767564 139% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.625 20.6045352989 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.91666666667 5.45110844103 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 3.85842293907 285% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted. What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.205653263614 0.236089414692 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0549967363927 0.076458572812 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.046585505966 0.0737576698707 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.138946617412 0.150856017488 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0336258942651 0.0645574589148 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.5 11.7677419355 140% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 58.1214874552 78% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.1575268817 132% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.35 10.9000537634 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.08 8.01818996416 113% => OK
difficult_words: 168.0 86.8835125448 193% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.0537634409 123% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK What are above readability scores?
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Write the essay in 30 minutes.
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100 Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
--------------------- Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 32, Rule ID: NUMEROUS_DIFFERENT[1]
Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
Modern society have evolved in many different ways and created a new world with techn...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 681, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[3]
Message: The verb 'did' requires base form of the verb: 'have'
Suggestion: have
...ing for the college, he did not frankly had an interest in engineering, however, he...
^^^
Line 6, column 839, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
...ea, financial scams and hacking happens everyday and people lost enormous amount of mone...
^^^^^^^^
Line 6, column 950, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'become'.
Suggestion: become
...ion to their passwords and I was almost became a victim of those financial scams as we...
^^^^^^
Line 6, column 1207, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'did' requires the base form of the verb: 'change'
Suggestion: change
.... Since majority of the victims did not changed or updated their password regularly, th...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, frankly, however, if, moreover, regarding, so, still, therefore, thus, well, while, after all, for example, for instance, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 15.1003584229 126% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 36.0 13.8261648746 260% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 43.0788530466 97% => OK
Preposition: 98.0 52.1666666667 188% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.0752688172 198% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3340.0 1977.66487455 169% => OK
No of words: 639.0 407.700716846 157% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.2269170579 4.8611393121 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 5.02776782673 4.48103885553 112% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72717086694 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 326.0 212.727598566 153% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.510172143975 0.524837075471 97% => OK
syllable_count: 1053.0 618.680645161 170% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 12.0 4.94265232975 243% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6003584229 117% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 20.1344086022 129% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 66.5642964025 48.9658058833 136% => OK
Chars per sentence: 139.166666667 100.406767564 139% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.625 20.6045352989 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.91666666667 5.45110844103 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 3.85842293907 285% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.205653263614 0.236089414692 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0549967363927 0.076458572812 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.046585505966 0.0737576698707 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.138946617412 0.150856017488 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0336258942651 0.0645574589148 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.5 11.7677419355 140% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 58.1214874552 78% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.1575268817 132% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.35 10.9000537634 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.08 8.01818996416 113% => OK
difficult_words: 168.0 86.8835125448 193% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.0537634409 123% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Write the essay in 30 minutes.
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.