Since the twentieth century, people’s life has been changed into what scientists call as modern life. In spite of all the advantages of the new lifestyle, it also brings more complexity to individuals, particularly the young who are more involved with it. Therefore, in order to better keep up with the rapid pace of life, personally I agree with the idea that one should have a specific plan. The benefits of being organized is discussed in the following passage.
The first and the foremost reason why I support being organized is that it helps individuals to save more time. Undoubtedly, modern life is strongly associated with a number of responsibilities that a person is dealt with. Although it may seem confusing at first, complications would be smooth by a well-arranged plan. When people have a determined plan, they know how to manage the tasks according to priority and in a particular time period. This, in turn, results in saving more time. A housewife, for example, may accomplish all the house chores in the morning to make the evening free to spend with her children.
Furthermore, having plan is a good way to save money. Unfortunately, the cost of living has been increased recently. However, one could not only avoid wasting the budget, but also would be able to save money using a certain plan on the necessary and unnecessay things. Then, he or she may find the unnecessary things worth emitting from the list and save that much money as the family account. For instance, a university student would find it more beneficial to save money than treating his or her friends for a dinner.
Finally, having fun would be a direct consequence of being organized. Nowadays, many people are complaining of the hectic day-to-day life. Nonetheless, it is likely to meet a few number of people who claim that modern life brings them joy. These lucky people state that being organized makes them save more time and as a result they find some time to enjoy their leisure time. For example, after a busy week, an organized person would make some time free to spend the weekends with his friends playing football or cycling. Interestingly, being organized makes it possible for an individual to have some plan to not only fulfill his or her comitment but also to enjoy his or her life.
Overall, taking into account all these factors, I certainly believe that being organized is necessarily required in order to save time and money and also enjoy each moment of life.
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'finally', 'first', 'furthermore', 'however', 'if', 'may', 'nonetheless', 'so', 'then', 'therefore', 'well', 'for example', 'for instance', 'as a result', 'in spite of']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.203781512605 0.229887763892 89% => OK
Verbs: 0.182773109244 0.158761421928 115% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0903361344538 0.0866891130778 104% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0525210084034 0.046263068375 114% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0525210084034 0.0685040099705 77% => OK
Prepositions: 0.102941176471 0.118717715034 87% => OK
Participles: 0.0714285714286 0.0351676179071 203% => Less participles wanted.
Conjunctions: 2.73478244498 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0357142857143 0.0309702414327 115% => OK
Particles: 0.00210084033613 0.00188951952338 111% => OK
Determiners: 0.0987394957983 0.0887237588012 111% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0210084033613 0.0209618222197 100% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0126050420168 0.0139019557991 91% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2510.0 2387.08602151 105% => OK
No of words: 424.0 408.028673835 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.91981132075 5.86048508987 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.53775939005 4.48200974243 101% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.299528301887 0.338922669872 88% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.221698113208 0.251872472559 88% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.176886792453 0.174417080927 101% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.122641509434 0.112833075102 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73478244498 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 223.0 212.727598566 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.525943396226 0.524397521467 100% => OK
Word variations: 59.9323692929 59.2087087015 101% => OK
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6684587814 106% => OK
Sentence length: 19.2727272727 20.5533526081 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.1382273929 48.84282405 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.090909091 120.699889404 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2727272727 20.5533526081 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.772727272727 0.644075263715 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.5376344086 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.54480286738 72% => OK
Readability: 41.4425385935 45.7405998639 91% => OK
Elegance: 1.31386861314 1.45489161554 90% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.383431059452 0.300154397459 128% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.101468780117 0.103427244359 98% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0713768600601 0.0752933317313 95% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.485219399534 0.497263757937 98% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.171910062643 0.151897553556 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.137229943246 0.114077575197 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0663597825129 0.0781384742642 85% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.326988433223 0.336927656856 97% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0783229689317 0.067059652881 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.2466333815 0.210909579961 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0754766584717 0.0618886996521 122% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8870967742 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.86379928315 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.91756272401 41% => OK
Positive topic words: 14.0 8.42114695341 166% => OK
Negative topic words: 4.0 2.4623655914 162% => OK
Neutral topic words: 1.0 2.75985663082 36% => OK
Total topic words: 19.0 13.6433691756 139% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 83.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 25.0 Out of 30
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.