TPO 49
There is no doubt that friends plays a key role in people's lives. No one can deny the effect of friends in our daily activities. A controversial question which is often raised regard this issue is whether to have small number of friends for long time or not. some people believe it is better to interact with few people over a long period. However, some others may take an opposing viewpoint and believe it is better to make many new friends easily. From my own perspective the second belief is preferable. As far as I'm concerned it is essential for everyone to find new friends. In the following paragraphs, I will pinpoint the most prominent reasons.
First of all, one should take to account this significant fact that people's behavior and the way they think may change through time. As a matter of fact since people encounter new situation and grow not only their habits change but also their attitude and opinion may differ Ergo, they may not like to associate with the same people. To demonstrate, take for example one of my friend which really have fun with me climbing mountain every week but as we grew up, she was eager to stay home to study and read book instead of spending her time in the mountains. Therefore, due to this change it was better for both of us to find new friends.
In approaching the issue, one should regard another point that having interaction with different people will teach one distinctive knowledge. In other words we can learn a special thing from each person. if we have the limited friends, we can only gain finite information from them. To illustrate, I would like to mention the available statistics about this issue. According to statistics over 60 percent of successful person are capable of finding friends easily.
Admittedly, being in touch with the same people may have some benefits. for example you can easily know each other besides being with some people for many years means that you see their reaction in good and bad condition so you can trust them better.
Actually, there are some other reasons and examples, supporting these claims, which I'm refrained from mentioning above. All in all Although having few friends have some advantages but I think it is better to be capable to make new friends easily to learn variety of things from different person moreover as the way you live change you can be friend with new friends who has things more in common with you.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 260, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Some
...number of friends for long time or not. some people believe it is better to interact...
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Line 1, column 518, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
... second belief is preferable. As far as Im concerned it is essential for everyone ...
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Line 5, column 205, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: If
...learn a special thing from each person. if we have the limited friends, we can onl...
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Line 8, column 73, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: For
...the same people may have some benefits. for example you can easily know each other ...
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Line 8, column 156, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'years'' or 'year's'?
Suggestion: years'; year's
...besides being with some people for many years means that you see their reaction in go...
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Line 10, column 85, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...xamples, supporting these claims, which Im refrained from mentioning above. All in...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, besides, but, first, however, if, may, moreover, really, second, so, therefore, for example, i think, no doubt, as a matter of fact, first of all, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 9.8082437276 163% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 41.0 43.0788530466 95% => OK
Preposition: 60.0 52.1666666667 115% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2010.0 1977.66487455 102% => OK
No of words: 424.0 407.700716846 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.74056603774 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.53775939005 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43604105319 2.67179642975 91% => OK
Unique words: 226.0 212.727598566 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.533018867925 0.524837075471 102% => OK
syllable_count: 610.2 618.680645161 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.0820678346 48.9658058833 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.7142857143 100.406767564 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1904761905 20.6045352989 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.42857142857 5.45110844103 155% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 11.8709677419 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0 0.236089414692 0% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0 0.076458572812 0% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0737576698707 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0 0.150856017488 0% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0645574589148 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 11.7677419355 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 58.1214874552 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.21 10.9000537634 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.57 8.01818996416 94% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 86.8835125448 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 3.33333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 30
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