tpo 49
The friendships is a very important part of our lives. Since we need somebode to encourage us and be beside us when we have a problems and when we are sad this kind of relation ships will maintain our psychological health for sure. when we maintain our friendships with a small number f people over a long period of time then we will more happy, some people would say it is great idea, others would oppose me. In my view, Maintaining friendships with small number of people would make us so happy.
The main reason is that the small numer of people on our lives make our lives more calm, sweet, we will be more strong and we have the ability to maintain it very well. For example, I have a friend with friendship age twelve years her name is Nidaa and we are so happy, we respect each other , give the positive energy to each and both apreciate this relation so we love that. This experience taught me that my old friends is so important in my life so i must maintain our friendship.
Another reason is that our secret is closed on our relation , there is no more people to know this secrets, this friends will save this secrets very well and don't tell any body else. Moreover, it will be very bad if we do not have a closed old friends so we could not find any one to tell our secrets. For instance, my sister do not have any old friend so she always could not tell any body her secrets , she always need me to hear her secrets and she annoyed me. As you can see, we must maintain our friendship and do not keep them go.
In sum, though some may oppose my idea, maintaining friendships is important source to make ourselves so happy. Not only make us so strong but also we can find a good place to keep our secrets in.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 17, Rule ID: AGREEMENT_SENT_START[4]
Message: You should probably use: 'are'.
Suggestion: are
The friendships is a very important part of our lives. Sin...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: When
...tain our psychological health for sure. when we maintain our friendships with a smal...
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Line 1, column 307, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
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...ith a small number f people over a long period of time then we will more happy, some people wo...
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Suggestion: ,
...d we are so happy, we respect each other , give the positive energy to each and bo...
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...d friends is so important in my life so i must maintain our friendship. Anothe...
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...hat our secret is closed on our relation , there is no more people to know this se...
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...ation , there is no more people to know this secrets, this friends will save this se...
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...ow this secrets, this friends will save this secrets very well and dont tell any bod...
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...ds will save this secrets very well and dont tell any body else. Moreover, it will b...
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...ve this secrets very well and dont tell any body else. Moreover, it will be very bad if ...
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...closed old friends so we could not find any one to tell our secrets. For instance, my s...
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...old friend so she always could not tell any body her secrets , she always need me to hea...
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...ways could not tell any body her secrets , she always need me to hear her secrets ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, moreover, so, then, well, for example, for instance, kind of, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 9.8082437276 173% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 62.0 43.0788530466 144% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 25.0 52.1666666667 48% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1397.0 1977.66487455 71% => OK
No of words: 329.0 407.700716846 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.2462006079 4.8611393121 87% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25891501996 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.25432239133 2.67179642975 84% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 212.727598566 71% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.45896656535 0.524837075471 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 431.1 618.680645161 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.51630824373 86% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.6003584229 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.1344086022 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 47.6258842655 48.9658058833 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.461538462 100.406767564 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.3076923077 20.6045352989 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.07692307692 5.45110844103 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.5376344086 235% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0 0.236089414692 0% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0 0.076458572812 0% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0737576698707 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0 0.150856017488 0% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0645574589148 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 11.7677419355 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.48 58.1214874552 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.67 10.9000537634 70% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.51 8.01818996416 81% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 86.8835125448 39% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.0537634409 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 3.33333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 30
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