Most people prefer to make new friends in order to find happiness and new experiences as a social environment. But in my opinion, I disagree with this decision. I prefer to maintain my old friends even when this group is very small, because of the next reasons.
Firstly, making many new friends as a needing sometimes could have some disadvantages, those people do not know you very well and they do not care what are your interests or your familiar situation, whatever. For example, imagine you are going to the college and you are a freshman, you do not know anyone on campus, and for any reason, you need to share your time with others. Therefore, you can have a meeting with other students, introducing yourself, etc. However, you cannot say those people will be confident because it is too soon to trust with. Even though, it is very important to wait a little more time, until you could identify each person and therefore, determinate who will be your real friend.
Secondly, maintaining your friendship with a small group would be better, because you can spend your time with them, share your opinions, what things you like, and as a result of this, you are maybe creating a solid relationship with those who care to you.
Additionally, most people, not in my case, have the ability to make new friends, and they can be part of a solid friendship, however, according to the behavior of everyone, and how it is measuring its plans with those friends, it could be produced a real happiness, a strong social environment and this is very valuable.
Finally, I can mention that I am a person very shy and not very sociable. In addition, I consider that maintaining my very small group of friends could bring happiness to me, moreover, this theory could have many variations in order to understand what other people need to be happy. Think about it...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, firstly, however, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, for example, in addition, as a result, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 9.8082437276 153% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 50.0 43.0788530466 116% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 52.1666666667 67% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1541.0 1977.66487455 78% => OK
No of words: 325.0 407.700716846 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.74153846154 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24591054749 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62017660546 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 212.727598566 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.510769230769 0.524837075471 97% => OK
syllable_count: 471.6 618.680645161 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.86738351254 268% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.6003584229 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.1344086022 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 84.2499802469 48.9658058833 172% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.538461538 100.406767564 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0 20.6045352989 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.4615384615 5.45110844103 210% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.28062704509 0.236089414692 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10097410147 0.076458572812 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0539054744818 0.0737576698707 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.153766198404 0.150856017488 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0553346946279 0.0645574589148 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 11.7677419355 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 58.1214874552 94% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.51 10.9000537634 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.89 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 86.8835125448 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.0537634409 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 63.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 19.0 Out of 30
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