Friendship is one of the more valuable things in life. Our whole life moves around family and good friends. Therefore, old friends play an important role in our life. However, some people think it is more interesting to make new friends rather than maintain the old ones. In my opinion, those few friendships over a long period of time bring more joy and happiness than a bunch of temporary friends.
Building strong relationships is a hard but a reward job that fulfills your life with good people. Best friends are the ones who have been present since you were a teenager. The ones who were present for your graduation, your first heardcrush, for your crazy college birthday parties. You wish that will last forever, but we grow up. We move to new cities to study or work, and every time you see each other less often. However, there is a strong feeling that lasts forever and brings peace, joy, and support when you need it. My best friend lives far away from me. We meet once a year with luck. It has no been easy to keep in touch, but I try to call her at least once a week Because I now It worth it. she is always there for the best and worse moments. I know there is someone I can trust whenever I need. And that makes me happy.
During your life, you met a lot people but you hardly can count on them in bad moments. Usually, friends from party, work or life are temporary. You hardly are going to trust them for personal things which are the most important. When I move to the capital city, I made a buch of friends at work and parting. We had great times, but when I really needed someone to talk or when I had problems, the only ones who were there, were my old friends. The ones who lived hundreds of miles away but really care about me. Personally, this does not have cost.
To conclude, it totally worth to keep the old friends and work hard to build strong relationships that last. At the end, those people are the ones who are going to be there for the hard moments. Keep in mind, best friends are like stars. Even if you can not see them, they are always there.
- TPO-49 - Independent Writing Task Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?The ability to maintain friendships with a small number of people over a long period of time is more important for happiness than the ability to make many new friends 70
- TPO-49 - Integrated Writing Task Like many creatures, humpback whales migrate long distances for feeding and mating purposes. How animals manage to migrate long distances is often puzzling. In the case of humpback whales, we may have found the answer: the 40
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 322, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...nion, those few friendships over a long period of time bring more joy and happiness than a bun...
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Line 3, column 356, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...r, but we grow up. We move to new cities to study or work, and every time you see...
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Line 3, column 606, Rule ID: NOW[3]
Message: Did you mean 'now' (=at this moment) instead of 'no' (negation)?
Suggestion: now
.... We meet once a year with luck. It has no been easy to keep in touch, but I try t...
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Line 3, column 782, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...d worse moments. I know there is someone I can trust whenever I need. And that ma...
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Line 5, column 150, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[4]
Message: The adverb 'hardly' is usually put after the verb 'are'.
Suggestion: are hardly
... party, work or life are temporary. You hardly are going to trust them for personal things...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, really, so, therefore, at least, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 15.1003584229 139% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 13.8261648746 130% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.0286738351 136% => OK
Pronoun: 54.0 43.0788530466 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 52.1666666667 73% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.0752688172 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1695.0 1977.66487455 86% => OK
No of words: 393.0 407.700716846 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.31297709924 4.8611393121 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.45244063426 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.15414202763 2.67179642975 81% => OK
Unique words: 208.0 212.727598566 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.529262086514 0.524837075471 101% => OK
syllable_count: 512.1 618.680645161 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.51630824373 86% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 18.0 9.59856630824 188% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 1.86738351254 321% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 28.0 20.6003584229 136% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.1344086022 70% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.8488539417 48.9658058833 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 60.5357142857 100.406767564 60% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.0357142857 20.6045352989 68% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.53571428571 5.45110844103 47% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 23.0 11.8709677419 194% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.17772706612 0.236089414692 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.046526495698 0.076458572812 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0466314451393 0.0737576698707 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114640535826 0.150856017488 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0645962798537 0.0645574589148 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.9 11.7677419355 50% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 82.65 58.1214874552 142% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.2 10.1575268817 51% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 7.13 10.9000537634 65% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.26 8.01818996416 78% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 86.8835125448 55% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.0537634409 76% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 10.247311828 59% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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