From the very first day of emergence of modernity, people are paying more attention to arts and sports. Some people are to the opinion that, athletics are more popular among people and supporting them should be one of the great concerns of the government. However, others oppose this claim and believe that government's support for art is more crucial. I personally agree with the latter idea. I will pinpoint the most outstanding reasons in the following paragraphs.
The reason crossing the mind at first glance is that sports don't require much support from the government in comparison to art. There are quite a lot of private companies and individuals who are inclined to support athletics and due to the fact that a great amount of budget is needed for supporting it, governments cannot provide enough money for this purpose. On the contrary, arts are not getting enough attention from private companies. Hence, the government should afford their expenses and provide them with a considerable budget. To illustrate, in my country, football teams are all getting supported by big, rich companies that are self-governed and they are not in the need of government's budget. However, most artists are complaining about the lack of money they need to strive for their artistic goals.
The second reason which is worth some words is that arts can positively affect people's lives and mental health. It goes without saying that these days, many people are suffering from mental diseases. From the psychologists' viewpoint, art is the best cure for most of these diseases. To illustrate, a study conducted in my country reveals that, artistic activities like playing a musical instrument, painting, or even listening to music or attending an art exhibition, functions certain parts of the brain that are normally deactivated. When these sections of the brain get activated, they release some hormones which are responsible for the creation of feelings like happiness.
The last but not least is that arts and culture of a country are not separable and it goes without saying that each country should respect its culture and spread it among its people. Hence, one field that they should pay attention to, is of course arts. For instance, imagine what could have happened to Italy with such a great history in arts, if it was not for government's efforts to save and serve its culture by taking care of its architecture.
By considering all the aforementioned reasons, supporting the arts is vital for maintaining the societies' mental health and without the government's efforts, there are no guarantees that the arts will improve. I firmly suggest governments to allocate a significant amount of their budget to support the arts in their countries.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
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Suggestion: psychologists'; psychologist's
...uffering from mental diseases. From the psychologists viewpoint, art is the best cure for mos...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, hence, however, if, second, so, for instance, of course, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 26.0 15.1003584229 172% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 11.0286738351 154% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 43.0788530466 97% => OK
Preposition: 59.0 52.1666666667 113% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2301.0 1977.66487455 116% => OK
No of words: 450.0 407.700716846 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.11333333333 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.6057793516 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7448042949 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 227.0 212.727598566 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.504444444444 0.524837075471 96% => OK
syllable_count: 693.9 618.680645161 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.2408974746 48.9658058833 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.571428571 100.406767564 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4285714286 20.6045352989 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 5.45110844103 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.232325529626 0.236089414692 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0720525655832 0.076458572812 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0533301744004 0.0737576698707 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137208637853 0.150856017488 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0774016267833 0.0645574589148 120% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 11.7677419355 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 58.1214874552 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 10.9000537634 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.05 8.01818996416 100% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 86.8835125448 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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