TPO 57: Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
The best way to truly relax and reduce stress is to spend time alone.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Since the dawn of civilization, human beings have been experiencing countless difficulties due to hustle and bustle of living. Stress is the most significant outcome of this huge revolution. There's a long debate between academia which being alone is beneficial to reduce stress or ones should communicate and socialize with other people when they get nervous. From my perspective, people should be alone when they want to truly relax. The following paragraphs will illustrate my viewpoints.
The first reason to be mentioned is that stress will be reduced by being alone thanks to thinking deeply about the possible solutions for the main problem. When people are alone they can consider all aspects of the problem and as a result, they will finally solve it. Not to mention they will feel more relaxed in this way. As a case in point, having stress, I cannot feel comfortable when I socialized with my friends. Not having leisure time to contemplate and find an answer to my problem increases my stress. In other words, hanging out with friends in this situation makes me more anxious rather than relaxed.
The other exquisite reason is that walking and listening to music can reduce one's stress and it'll be possible if one is alone. One of the old research done by Harvard psychology students revealed that exercising as well as playing music are the best ways to reduce one's stress. It keeps one away from one's difficulties and helps to make a better decision. I have a compelling example in this vein, about two years ago, I was located in a deep depression. My psychologist told me to exercise regularly in a gym and as a result, I forgot my difficulties during doing sports. After leaving the gym, I had a fresh mind to think and make brilliant decisions.
To sum up, being alone will help people to reduce their stress because of thinking deeply about the possible solutions for their problems. In addition, listening to music and doing individual sports like walking, which contribute to reducing their stress, is achievable when they are alone.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: There's
...ficant outcome of this huge revolution. Theres a long debate between academia which be...
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Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...uce ones stress. It keeps one away from ones difficulties and helps to make a better...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, if, so, well, in addition, as a result, as well as, in other words, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 43.0788530466 77% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 52.1666666667 92% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1710.0 1977.66487455 86% => OK
No of words: 349.0 407.700716846 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.89971346705 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32221490584 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66447606129 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 212.727598566 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.547277936963 0.524837075471 104% => OK
syllable_count: 531.0 618.680645161 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.1490135239 48.9658058833 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.0 100.406767564 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3684210526 20.6045352989 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.15789473684 5.45110844103 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.85842293907 259% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.173608901577 0.236089414692 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0542285604879 0.076458572812 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.034314720841 0.0737576698707 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108550685386 0.150856017488 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0157485632073 0.0645574589148 24% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 11.7677419355 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 58.1214874552 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.14 10.9000537634 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.97 8.01818996416 99% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 86.8835125448 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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