TPO 57: Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
The best way to truly relax and reduce stress is to spend time alone.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
In our hectic world, many people have a lots of choice to cope with their stress and strains. In my opinion, the best way to reduce stress is to spend time with family or friends because of two reasons which will be discussed in the following essay.
To begin with, spending time with family and friends help people to forget their stress. To be more specific, both close friends and close family know about us, so they know how they can act to change our mood. My own experience is a compelling example of this. Two years ago, I have terrible conditions on my career due to have a strict manager because we worked on the biggest architectural project on the country. Thus, when I came back home, I had deeply depression, but my sisters and close friend helped me to address my acute problems. Most of time, the told jokes and try to create funny circumstance to make me happy. As a result, they not only could turn my feeling but also could increase my self-esteem.
Furthermore, being with others people instead of being alone provide a welcome opportunity to consult with them. In fact, when people speak with others, they can able to decrease their pressure, so they stay healthier in the long run. For instance, last semester, I had enormous stress because I had lots of exams and assignments. My roommate said me many students were like you and they could pass their final exams with drying color. If you focused on your purpose, you will be successful.
To summarize, I firmly believe that people can have pleasant time with their friends or family members if they have stress. This is because their friends know them, and they can consult with their family or close friend in order to reduce their pressure.
- TPO 56 Some people like to keep a record of their own experiences by uploading pictures and other information to social networking sites Other people prefer not to create such records Which approach do you prefer and why Use specific reasons and examples 3
- TPO 58 Which one of the following values is the most important to share with a young child 5 10 years old 1 being helpful 2 Being honest 3 Being well organized 61
- TPO 55 Do you agree or disagree with the following statement When classmates or colleagues communicate about a project in person instead of by e mail they will produce better work for the project Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer 70
- TPO 55 Do you agree or disagree with the following statement When classmates or colleagues communicate about a project in person instead of by e mail they will produce better work for the project Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer 70
- Cambridge Book 12 Test 1 Writing Task 2 Governments should spend money on railways rather than roads To what extent do you agree or disagree with this government 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 39, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a lot' or simply 'lots'?
Suggestion: a lot; lots
In our hectic world, many people have a lots of choice to cope with their stress and...
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Line 5, column 344, Rule ID: SAY_TELL[2]
Message: 'Say' cannot be followed by a direct personal object. Did you mean 'told'?
Suggestion: told
...s of exams and assignments. My roommate said me many students were like you and they...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, so, thus, for instance, in fact, as a result, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.0286738351 36% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 46.0 43.0788530466 107% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 52.1666666667 82% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1420.0 1977.66487455 72% => OK
No of words: 305.0 407.700716846 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.65573770492 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17902490978 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.38308109752 2.67179642975 89% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 212.727598566 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.550819672131 0.524837075471 105% => OK
syllable_count: 426.6 618.680645161 69% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.1814768946 48.9658058833 60% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 88.75 100.406767564 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0625 20.6045352989 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.375 5.45110844103 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.15045509211 0.236089414692 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.060187993338 0.076458572812 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0662375645355 0.0737576698707 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115977089262 0.150856017488 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0661800598947 0.0645574589148 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 11.7677419355 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 58.1214874552 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.1575268817 82% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.75 10.9000537634 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.53 8.01818996416 94% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 86.8835125448 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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