There are a variety of opinions about whether life is simpler and more pleasant nowadays in comparison with the past or not. In my perspective, I strongly believe that people live better and easier today when we hear the stories of our grandparents. In what follows, I will pinpoint the two most prominent rationals to elaborate on this.
My first reason to champion my standpoint is that as technology has been developing through the time, it has made our life more comfortable. In the past, people had to go shopping in person, while today they can buy everything online. Even though we go to buy goods in person sometimes, but using cars makes it much easier compared to our grandparents' childhood. My personal experience is a great example of that. I remember the story from my grandfather which strongly shocked me. People in his town were compelled to cross forty miles to purchase clothes!
Secondly, it is undeniable to not consider the fact that medicine and hygiene have improved during the time. Nowadays, more illness become known and as a result, different diseases are treated more easily. More medications and vaccines have been discovered by scientists, so less people die due to these astonishing discoveries. My grandmother told me her best friend passed away because of Measles which is prevented by vaccination today.
Based on what is discussed I firmly believe that today people live more comfortable because of developing of technology and discovering of new medications and vaccines.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 276, Rule ID: FEWER_LESS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun people is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
... have been discovered by scientists, so less people die due to these astonishing dis...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, second, secondly, so, while, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 9.8082437276 20% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 30.0 43.0788530466 70% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 52.1666666667 65% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1268.0 1977.66487455 64% => OK
No of words: 249.0 407.700716846 61% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.09236947791 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97237131171 4.48103885553 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8752608097 2.67179642975 108% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 212.727598566 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.650602409639 0.524837075471 124% => OK
syllable_count: 401.4 618.680645161 65% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.6003584229 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.3275695264 48.9658058833 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.5384615385 100.406767564 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1538461538 20.6045352989 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.30769230769 5.45110844103 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.137130811279 0.236089414692 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.043821791678 0.076458572812 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0324001704624 0.0737576698707 44% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0846222128417 0.150856017488 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0152205946975 0.0645574589148 24% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 11.7677419355 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 58.1214874552 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 10.9000537634 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.7 8.01818996416 109% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 86.8835125448 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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