Tpo-6: independent task:
Do you agree or disagree?
Life today is easier and more comfortable than it was when your grandparents were children.
Some people believe that life today is easier and more comfortable than it was when our grandparents were children. however, it is my firm belief that life today is more complex and I will explain these ideas in subsequent paragraphs.
To begin with, globalization, today's world is so busy working and doing things that don't exist before for the bright future of mankind. apparently, when our grandparents were kids they don't experience this phenomenon because that time modernization don't even start. For instance, when my grandparents were a kid they used to do farming in which they take the crop and harvest it and use it for themselves only but today we can't do that because we need things other than food to live in today's world. for this reason, today's life is hard than earlier.
secondly, competition, when my grandparents were kids they don't need to go to school because their main work is farming and it don't require education. consequently, today if we don't complete our education the fewer chances of getting a job we have to get at least a normal degree from the average university. for example if I don't take any degree from a university I am not able to do things like reading and doing things that require education. that's why my grandparent's life was more comfortable at that time.
for last, climate change, yes climate change is happening in today's world it is real so we need to find out ways through which we can defeat this problem. moreover, our grandparents not went through it because that time they don't create any pollution and lived in a society that had a bunch of cars and factories. For example, people who are born in their mid-50s and 60s are less affected by lung and skin diseases which probably occur because of pollution. it's certainly clear to see why our grandparents lived a happy and longer life.
to conclude, it is true that our grandparents don't have access to such facilities and services that we are experiencing now. however, In light of the reasons mentioned, I strongly believe that life today is not easier as it was when our grandparents were a kid.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
apparently, but, consequently, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, at least, for example, for instance, it is true, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 15.1003584229 139% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 21.0 11.0286738351 190% => OK
Pronoun: 56.0 43.0788530466 130% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 52.1666666667 65% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1740.0 1977.66487455 88% => OK
No of words: 368.0 407.700716846 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.72826086957 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37987740619 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69617259177 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 212.727598566 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.5 0.524837075471 95% => OK
syllable_count: 536.4 618.680645161 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.1747419543 48.9658058833 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.75 100.406767564 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0 20.6045352989 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.625 5.45110844103 158% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 28.0 5.5376344086 506% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.27474162204 0.236089414692 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.115409803961 0.076458572812 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.120499413913 0.0737576698707 163% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.194117714539 0.150856017488 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.107976989782 0.0645574589148 167% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 11.7677419355 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 58.1214874552 97% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.45 10.9000537634 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.39 8.01818996416 92% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 86.8835125448 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 71.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.5 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.