TPO 6 q 2. life today is easier than the past

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TPO 6 q 2. life today is easier than the past

Now it is commonly accepted that the science and technology make our life more and more convenient with a fast rate. Contrary to this belief, there are still those who argue that people had a simpler and better life in the past. However, I, in a great extent, agree with this idea that our life is developed and promoted in many aspects todays.

The first aspect to point out is that internet and communication methods are promoted in many ways. Todays, Everybody has a cellphone with a lot of features. By using smart phones, people can see each other from a long distance and talk online. Fin...

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