Grandparents are the one, whom every child in family looks up to, for knowledge and wisdom.They are one big sea of wisdom, passing it on to each and every generation that follows. But most of us are unaware of how their life was as a child, how they lived, what kind of environment they grew up in. Some adults of today might be of the opinion that, it would have been tough for them, to grow out of poverty and the hurdles life threw at them. While some may believe the exact opposite, and say that they have lived a fulfilling childhood. I agree with the latter and feel that grandparents had it easy in their times and i have various reasons to support this.
Today's world may have offered us an advanced lifestyle but one cannot simple ignore the widespread pollution in today's world. As opposed to this, the ancient times had clearer green lands, the cities were clean, and it had a more sustainable environment than the one we are facing today. I remember a conversation i had with my grandpa, a long time ago when I visited him. He told me a lot about the river he had close to his house. The most peaceful time was the one he had swimming in the clear water every afternoon, he had said. In fact, the astonishing thing about the river was that one could actually see the bottom of the river as if there were no impurity in it. But now when i see the river it is all polluted and is impossible to even stand nearby. Thus, the grandparents enjoyed a very clean environment.
Additionally, money had weight age in the olden times, and it had value. Now-a-days, inflation has engulfed the market and the prices are at an all time high. Money has lost its value, and it is a rising problem which i feel that the grandparents never had. For instance, things that used to be inexpensive have grown costlier. Toys, Food items, even travelling were cheaper as compared to today. My grandpa loved travelling a lot. The amount of money he has to spend on bus journey today, he could travel four times the journey in his olden days. In fact education was also cheaper.
Also, the education was provided at a cheaper rate and the competition for getting an admission was at an all time low. Students have to really focus on grades, extra curricular and various activities today, if they want to get into a good school. They older generation had it easy.The population was low which provided tonne of opportunities. Enrollment into schools became easy. While today, getting accepted into a school would be considered a miracle, because we are facing a population explosion. In fact, people have to bribe the school authorities to enroll their child.
In conclusion, the older generation had a very peaceful environment in which they grew. They not only enjoyed the beauty of clean nature but also the money had a great value in their time. They were presented with a lot of opportunities in the field of education. Thus, due to these reasons, I feels grandparents had a easier and more comfortable life in their childhood.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: They
...y looks up to, for knowledge and wisdom.They are one big sea of wisdom, passing it o...
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'hurdles'' or 'hurdle's'?
Suggestion: hurdles'; hurdle's
...or them, to grow out of poverty and the hurdles life threw at them. While some may beli...
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...facing today. I remember a conversation i had with my grandpa, a long time ago wh...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
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...re were no impurity in it. But now when i see the river it is all polluted and is...
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...value, and it is a rising problem which i feel that the grandparents never had. F...
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Suggestion: than
...ood items, even travelling were cheaper as compared to today. My grandpa loved tra...
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...hool. They older generation had it easy.The population was low which provided tonne...
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... very peaceful environment in which they grew. They not only enjoyed the beauty o...
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Suggestion: feel
...ducation. Thus, due to these reasons, I feels grandparents had a easier and more comf...
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Suggestion: an
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, if, look, may, really, so, thus, while, as to, for instance, i feel, in conclusion, in fact, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 15.1003584229 159% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 13.8261648746 130% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 60.0 43.0788530466 139% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 62.0 52.1666666667 119% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.0752688172 223% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2492.0 1977.66487455 126% => OK
No of words: 541.0 407.700716846 133% => OK
Chars per words: 4.60628465804 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.82280071112 4.48103885553 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59626158327 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 272.0 212.727598566 128% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.502772643253 0.524837075471 96% => OK
syllable_count: 790.2 618.680645161 128% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 10.0 3.08781362007 324% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 1.86738351254 321% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 31.0 20.6003584229 150% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.672392734 48.9658058833 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.3870967742 100.406767564 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4516129032 20.6045352989 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.90322580645 5.45110844103 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.5376344086 181% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8709677419 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.147383209702 0.236089414692 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0387140078075 0.076458572812 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0399913740971 0.0737576698707 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0849567289722 0.150856017488 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0274118723614 0.0645574589148 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.0 11.7677419355 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 58.1214874552 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.16 10.9000537634 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.4 8.01818996416 92% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 86.8835125448 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 10.002688172 130% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.