TPO 60: Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
It is better to live in one town or city all your life than to move from one place to another.
Nowadays, with spending such sophisticated days, loads of people rethink the places they want to live in. Despite that some people prefer to stay in one town all their life, in my opinion, it is much better to travel around and change your habitation, due to a couple of reasons that I will explain in the following paragraphs.
To begin with, I believe it can broaden your horizon and perspective in your life since you experience new life and places, you meet new people with different culture and lifestyle, so you will find brand-new aspects in your life that cause to expand your points of view. In my country, for example, to support it, we have a famous idiom that advises us to travel around the world. It says a young person needs a good deal of trips to grow up and become mature. So it would be a great idea to move from places during the lifetime.
Secondly, it makes life more pleasant, happy, and mentally healthy. Because when you change your place during your life, days are not monotonous anymore. Life became like an adventure, thus you will enjoy it more. In such circumstances, you will have less tension and anxiety because every day is exciting. As a result, you are less at risk of disappointment and depression, then you will be healthier mentally.
Third, if you move around and change your city, it is more possible for you to find your favorite place to stay in your retirement and spend the rest of your life. You do not have to live wherever you are born. Besides, there is barely a chance to find your real ideal place just by searching. You should experience it and become aware of all advantages and disadvantages of a city, to find your ideal for your purpose, maybe raising kids or spend your elderly days in peace.
To sum up, it is better to experience living in different places, and it would be beneficial for you from several aspects of your life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, if, may, second, secondly, so, then, third, thus, for example, as a result, in my opinion, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 53.0 43.0788530466 123% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 54.0 52.1666666667 104% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1557.0 1977.66487455 79% => OK
No of words: 340.0 407.700716846 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.57941176471 4.8611393121 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29407602571 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47368678243 2.67179642975 93% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 212.727598566 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.529411764706 0.524837075471 101% => OK
syllable_count: 492.3 618.680645161 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.94265232975 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.7594835705 48.9658058833 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.3125 100.406767564 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.25 20.6045352989 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.75 5.45110844103 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.31337954284 0.236089414692 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101928835175 0.076458572812 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.065996982457 0.0737576698707 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.181179987883 0.150856017488 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.03052657128 0.0645574589148 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 11.7677419355 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 58.1214874552 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.28 10.9000537634 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.56 8.01818996416 94% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 86.8835125448 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 10.002688172 180% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.