TPO 7 - Independent task
When I was sixteen years old, I listened the story of a girl that went to study abroad. I was very fascinated by her story and from the vibrant tone of her voice while she was calling back to her mind so important memories. I believe that was the moment in which I decided that I wanted to study abroad too. Currently, I am planning to start a postgraduate course in a foreign country. Herein, I am going to explain more in details, by giving examples and explanations, why I think that studying abroad is great.
I believe that there are both good sides and bad sides in studying in a nation different from your homecountry. These considerations cannot be differentiated the ones from the others, as I think that some positve aspects of studying abroad may be also appear as less interesting just considering them from a different spotlight. First of all, studying in an another country, is once-in a life- experience! It can be considered a challenging adventure from any point of view. Indeed, you have to find a suitable accomodation for youself, you have to fill in residence permits, you have to attend classes held in a different language, you have to deal with a new reality that may be far way from the one you are used to. Some of these things may be look fabolous, some others less cool. In any case, there are advantages and disadvantages. Some bureacratic procedures may be very long and stressful. The thing may cause you a little of anxiety. You definitely have to go out from your comfort zone.
Secondly, it helps you to fit in different environments and situations, even to those with which you're not familiar with. In the beginning everything will seem even harder than it really is, just because it's new! To deal with the uncertain, to pass through administrative procedures, will make you stronger and clever like a fox. You will develop an important readiness in making decisions and in considering pros and cons of every situation. Thys type of experience may create some initial difficulties and some lonely feelings, but before you will realize it, this will boost your soft skills, you're problem solving attitude and your abilities to tackle new and exciting challenges. For example, I have already studied abroad during the last year of my master and I have to admit that I really enjoyed that experience. During my stay, I developed a "can do attitude" rather than a "complaint attitude". I completely changed my mind and even my attitude towards life in general.
To wrap up, such a pathway should be recommend to everyone as the strenghts coincide exactly with the weaks part of it. Its the whole process to make you a better person. What are you waiting for?
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a girl that went to study
a girl who went to study
may be also appear as less interesting
may be also appearing as less interesting
should be recommend to everyone
should be recommended to everyone
Its the whole process
It's the whole process
Sentence: I believe that there are both good sides and bad sides in studying in a nation different from your homecountry.
Error: homecountry Suggestion: home country
Sentence: These considerations cannot be differentiated the ones from the others, as I think that some positve aspects of studying abroad may be also appear as less interesting just considering them from a different spotlight.
Error: positve Suggestion: positive
Sentence: Indeed, you have to find a suitable accomodation for youself, you have to fill in residence permits, you have to attend classes held in a different language, you have to deal with a new reality that may be far way from the one you are used to.
Error: accomodation Suggestion: accommodation
Error: youself Suggestion: yourself
Sentence: Some of these things may be look fabolous, some others less cool.
Error: fabolous Suggestion: fabulous
Sentence: Some bureacratic procedures may be very long and stressful.
Error: bureacratic Suggestion: bureaucratic
Sentence: To wrap up, such a pathway should be recommend to everyone as the strenghts coincide exactly with the weaks part of it.
Error: strenghts Suggestion: strengths
Error: weaks Suggestion: No alternate word
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No. of Grammatical Errors: 4 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 8 2
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Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 22 in 30
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 4 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 8 2
No. of Sentences: 26 15
No. of Words: 472 350
No. of Characters: 2164 1500
No. of Different Words: 253 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.661 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.585 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.679 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 146 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 110 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 71 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 49 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 18.154 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 9.654 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.538 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.271 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.441 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.162 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 5