TPO ind 4
Transportation nowadays plays an essential role in our life and cars are the most important part of it. Almost all of all of us, directly or indirectly use automobiles every day. Car usage is not only for privet journies but also for several other applications in public transportation, products delivery, industries, cargoes and so on. If I want to answer the question where in the next twenty years there were fewer cars than are today, though many may agree with the idea, others would disagree. In my view, in the next twenty years, we have more cars on the planet for two important reasons.
The main reason is that there are several undeveloped and underdevelopment countries that are even at the beginning or middle of car usage and production. even though the human's technology is growing fast and such techs like it communications, computers usage, IoT are going to replace the common transportation, but uncivilized nations have not the money for this change. For example, when I was in Moscow during my doctoral studies, I found that it technologies are very common in peoples daily life. They could perform lots of things even their job remotely without real transportation. Such businesses like internet magazines played an important role in their life. some month ago I have traveled to Africa. People there were poor and in some regions even there were not pure water for drinking. Cars tech were old and internet speed was something near zero. As you can see, even though in developed places may virtual transportation is growing, but in some others, there are very low-speed development and new techs is not going to replace cars.
- TPO 3 integrated 3
- TPO 3 Integrated Essay 3
- TPO11Independant Some people believe that the Earth is being harmed damaged by human activity Others feel that human activity makes the Earth a better place to live What is your opinion Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer 70
- TPO ind 4 3
- TPO 4 _ Independent TaskDo you agree or disagree with the following statement?In twenty years there will be fewer cars in use than today.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 70
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 112, Rule ID: PHRASE_REPETITION[1]
Message: This phrase is duplicated. You should probably leave only 'all of'.
Suggestion: all of
...e the most important part of it. Almost all of all of us, directly or indirectly use automobi...
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Line 1, column 447, Rule ID: MANY_NN_U[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun may seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'much may', 'a good deal of may'.
Suggestion: much may; a good deal of may
... were fewer cars than are today, though many may agree with the idea, others would disag...
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Line 3, column 156, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Even
... or middle of car usage and production. even though the humans technology is growing...
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Line 3, column 172, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'humans'' or 'human's'?
Suggestion: humans'; human's
...r usage and production. even though the humans technology is growing fast and such tec...
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Line 3, column 671, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Some
...played an important role in their life. some month ago I have traveled to Africa. Pe...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, so, for example, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 43.0788530466 46% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 52.1666666667 56% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1377.0 1977.66487455 70% => OK
No of words: 278.0 407.700716846 68% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.95323741007 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08329915638 4.48103885553 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82296190507 2.67179642975 106% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 212.727598566 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.618705035971 0.524837075471 118% => OK
syllable_count: 436.5 618.680645161 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.59856630824 31% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.6697768738 48.9658058833 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.3571428571 100.406767564 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8571428571 20.6045352989 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.35714285714 5.45110844103 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.53405017921 44% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0 0.236089414692 0% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0 0.076458572812 0% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0737576698707 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0 0.150856017488 0% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0645574589148 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 11.7677419355 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 58.1214874552 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.43 10.9000537634 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.21 8.01818996416 102% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 86.8835125448 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 3.33333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 30
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