TPO11
Some people say that the internet provides people with a lot of valuable information. Others think access to so much information creates problems.
These days there is a lot of debate about massive information from the websites cause a lot of troubles to people. however, in my opinion, having ready access to the internet and grasp worth information and knowledge from it is absolutely somewhat beneficial for everyone. I feel this way for two reasons, which I will explore in the following essay.
To begin with, getting valuable information easily from online platforms save our time greatly because if we search around the book has essential information which we are seeking is completely a waste of time. it is also costly and hard to obtain from everywhere. I have to admit that my opinion on this matter has been profoundly influenced by my personal experience. two years ago, when I was conducting research on the history class, I had to acquire decent evidence of this topic but writing proof hasn't been in there. Then I slightly encountered the problem where I get that information, however, one day while I was surfing through the internet and I got a comment on the survival of this event. I was truly happy about it and included that proof in my research. As a result, I received a fairly good grade from my teacher. this example demonstrates how the internet could help me to obtain hidden evidence and reveal the true event behind the scene.
Secondly, using online resources is the chance to reach a lot of people and listen to their comment about serious problems such as political or even small things that bother us the most also every questions' answer in online but just only some of them in the paper. Drawing from my experience, in the last spring the building company occupied illegally the park where I usually spent my time there. In the first time, I was totally devastated because I thought that I was the only person to regain the remarkable place but when I found out that from the website if I created a Facebook group of opponents against the company was created by my neighbours, we would exactly give back our desired one. that was considerably pleased me and I collected the signatures of my groups, in a result, we retrieve our place which we wanted the most.
In conclusion, online websites provide great information to the public. this is because it is easily reachable to everyone and because it is the best opportunity to hear individuals opinions and get information which is not available in writing form.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, second, secondly, so, then, while, as to, i feel, in conclusion, such as, as a result, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 15.1003584229 126% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.0286738351 136% => OK
Pronoun: 59.0 43.0788530466 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 54.0 52.1666666667 104% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.0752688172 161% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1984.0 1977.66487455 100% => OK
No of words: 418.0 407.700716846 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.74641148325 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.52162009685 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6628717952 2.67179642975 100% => OK
Unique words: 229.0 212.727598566 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.547846889952 0.524837075471 104% => OK
syllable_count: 640.8 618.680645161 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.1344086022 119% => OK
Sentence length SD: 68.2447762174 48.9658058833 139% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.705882353 100.406767564 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5882352941 20.6045352989 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.58823529412 5.45110844103 158% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.114262741926 0.236089414692 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.033970806656 0.076458572812 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0378164101673 0.0737576698707 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0731182142117 0.150856017488 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0211553358956 0.0645574589148 33% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 11.7677419355 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 58.1214874552 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.57 10.9000537634 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.49 8.01818996416 106% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 86.8835125448 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.0537634409 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.