Neighbors are the people who live near us. In your opinion, what type of neighbor is the best to have?
-someone who is quiet
-someone who we are similar to
-someone who is supportive
Use specific details and examples in your answer.
In today’s society when we encountered any problems the first person to help in our neighbourhood who don’t always need to contact on a daily basis. In my opinion, Having a supportive neighbour is an essential thing for our busy life. I feel this way for two reasons, which I will explore in the following essay.
To begin with, We sometimes meet unplanned emergencies and obstacles that are required other’s immediate help. I have to admit my opinion on this matter has been profoundly influenced by my experience. Three years ago, the unfortunate disaster was caused and my house was burned due to the electrical broken down. My parents were completely panicked at first and we don’t know what to do because we lost most of the precious belongings in front of our eyes. I addition, we suffered an extreme amount of emotional trauma and it affected us a lot to be ambiguous. Fortunately, we have a warm-hearted and supportive neighbour who called the fire department as soon as saw the scene of terrific occurrence. As a result, we hadn’t lost whole things at least our some properties hadn’t affected by the fire. This experience demonstrates that having a compassionate neighbour is greatly beneficial to some unexpected circumstances.
Secondly, in a hectic society, everyone has an arduous time to manage their time in both their family and work equally. Drawing from my experience, in the last month I received a call from my boss to come to work and discuss a crucial project to the new investors, however, I had to look after my younger sister. Then I call my neighbour and asked to take care of my sister, she readily agreed to lend a hand to me and unspeakably helped me a lot. Since that time, I realised that being a supportive neighbour is indispensably vital to everyone and I decided to try hard to become the one. Without her aid, I easily lost my chance to receive a budget to conduct my project from the investors.
In conclusion, I firmly believe that having a supportive neighbour is the best assistance because of terrific incident emergencies and hard to obligate the duties in front of both family and work.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, look, second, secondly, so, then, at least, i feel, in conclusion, as a result, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 9.8082437276 20% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 50.0 43.0788530466 116% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 52.1666666667 98% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1796.0 1977.66487455 91% => OK
No of words: 370.0 407.700716846 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.85405405405 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38581623665 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00252632853 2.67179642975 112% => OK
Unique words: 213.0 212.727598566 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.575675675676 0.524837075471 110% => OK
syllable_count: 577.8 618.680645161 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.59856630824 146% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.9589237907 48.9658058833 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.647058824 100.406767564 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7647058824 20.6045352989 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.52941176471 5.45110844103 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0819755731497 0.236089414692 35% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0279213195232 0.076458572812 37% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0335190006442 0.0737576698707 45% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0530470118132 0.150856017488 35% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0384798895429 0.0645574589148 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 11.7677419355 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 58.1214874552 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.85 10.9000537634 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.86 8.01818996416 110% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 86.8835125448 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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