In past there was such a strong relationship between neighbors in societies and they actually affect on each other's life , but today neighbors are not so close and in some cases they do not even know each other, however, I personally believe neighbors whose personalities are like you are the best ones and I feel this way because of two reasons which I would explain in the following paragraphs.
First of all, one of the best things in the world is having a friend who lives close to you, so whats is better than having a neighbor who has the same interests as you? My personal experience that would support this idea, some years ago, me and my family move from our old family house to an apartment in a new neighborhood. On that days I was alone and did not have any friends, one day I was practicing my piano lessons and I think neighbor’s child heard my piano voice, so she came to our home and told me she is interested in piano too and we can practice it together, after that, we became friends till now.
Second, sometimes there is a conflict between neighbors because of noises or parties they may hold, if you have a neighbors who is similar to you, you can invite them to your party and having fun together and they would enjoy the atmosphere of party and even music played in your home, for instance, every time I hold a party in my apartment, and definitely invite my neighbors and it turns to a tradition for us to have parties in one of neighbors apartment every month and hanging out with each other.
In conclusion, I prefer to have a neighbor who thinks like me and who enjoys things in the way I enjoy because of the advantages of having a friend in near place with you and avoiding from usual conflicts between neighbors.
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- TOEFL T P O 43 - Integrated Writing Task 3
- The Salton Sea in California is actually a salty inland lake. The level of salt in the lake's water-what scientists call its salinity-has been increasing steadily for years because the lake's water is evaporating faster than it is being replaced 60
- Neighbors are the people who live near us. In your opinion, what type of neighbor is the best to have?-someone who is quiet-someone who we are similar to-someone who is supportiveUse specific details and examples in your answer. 70
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 95, Rule ID: AFFECT_EFFECT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'effect'?
Suggestion: effect
...eighbors in societies and they actually affect on each others life , but today neighbors ...
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Line 1, column 110, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'others'' or 'other's'?
Suggestion: others'; other's
...ieties and they actually affect on each others life , but today neighbors are not so c...
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...they actually affect on each others life , but today neighbors are not so close an...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: what's
...ing a friend who lives close to you, so whats is better than having a neighbor who ha...
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Line 3, column 113, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a neighbor' or simply 'neighbors'?
Suggestion: a neighbor; neighbors
...s or parties they may hold, if you have a neighbors who is similar to you, you can invite t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, first, however, if, may, second, so, for instance, i feel, i think, in conclusion, first of all, in some cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 13.8261648746 130% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 46.0 43.0788530466 107% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 52.1666666667 90% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1429.0 1977.66487455 72% => OK
No of words: 322.0 407.700716846 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.43788819876 4.8611393121 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23607819155 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53488348677 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 212.727598566 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.540372670807 0.524837075471 103% => OK
syllable_count: 451.8 618.680645161 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 20.6003584229 29% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 53.0 20.1344086022 263% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 125.142141406 48.9658058833 256% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 238.166666667 100.406767564 237% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 53.6666666667 20.6045352989 260% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 20.8333333333 5.45110844103 382% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 11.8709677419 42% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.228663935701 0.236089414692 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.12454967884 0.076458572812 163% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0920816854717 0.0737576698707 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145417204194 0.150856017488 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0483325088036 0.0645574589148 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 26.3 11.7677419355 223% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 34.6 58.1214874552 60% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 21.6 10.1575268817 213% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 9.36 10.9000537634 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.52 8.01818996416 106% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 86.8835125448 53% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 27.0 10.002688172 270% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 23.2 10.0537634409 231% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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