TPO3 - Independent writing - Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It is more important to keep your old friends than to make new friends.
Friends are the most valuable things that we can have in our lives. Some people prefer to make new friends, while the others prefer to have keep the old ones. To the extent that my personal point of view is concerned, I am of the conviction that we have to keep our old friends because not only can they understand us better, but they also help us more.
First, generally old friends know you better. People know nothing about each other but just physical characteristics, when they first form friendships. After a while and when their friendships grow, they will learn about each other’s behavioral characteristics. In long-term friendships, friends knows what makes their friends happy in a sad situations or what do they like. Close friends have a lot of things in common. As an example, they have same hobbies which they do in together; furthermore, they can talk to each other for hours without getting bored. They do anything to cemented their friendship. Somehow they become each other’s family.
Additionally, friends are the only ones that help you other than your family. You may encounter a problem in your life which your family cannot help you with or they don not understand. Your friends are the only ones that you can trust, share your secrets. You can talk about your problems with no worries of using them against you. When they are informed that you have a problem, they help you find a solution for it and they don not leave you in your hardships. Moreover, life-long friends know how they can help you. Sometimes all you need is someone that understands you and listen to you. This is the least thing that close friends can do it for you.
To sum up, we should keep our old friends and appreciate them for the way they understand us and having our backs through difficulties. Friendship is one the most valuable relationships that any social creature needs it.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 347, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'situation'?
Suggestion: situation
...what makes their friends happy in a sad situations or what do they like. Close friends hav...
^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, may, moreover, so, while, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 15.1003584229 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 68.0 43.0788530466 158% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 31.0 52.1666666667 59% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1566.0 1977.66487455 79% => OK
No of words: 329.0 407.700716846 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.75987841945 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25891501996 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60991767195 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 212.727598566 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.507598784195 0.524837075471 97% => OK
syllable_count: 447.3 618.680645161 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.8096437566 48.9658058833 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.5714285714 100.406767564 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.6666666667 20.6045352989 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.33333333333 5.45110844103 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 11.8709677419 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.224856703191 0.236089414692 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0845995685228 0.076458572812 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0582566604637 0.0737576698707 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130699307281 0.150856017488 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0614008978928 0.0645574589148 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.8 11.7677419355 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 58.1214874552 126% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 10.1575268817 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.03 10.9000537634 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.12 8.01818996416 89% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 86.8835125448 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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