Friends are very important and crucial to one's life. Without friends life will be miserable and unimaginable. Making friends is also fun and important to spread your network. Old friends are always the best options but creating new friends is also necessary. So, I think making new friends is important than staying with just old friends. I have some reason for this support.
Firstly, every old friends was a new person at the first time and one has to make friend. So, making friends is the first step of this process. Moreover, more friends mean more helping hand and a place of happiness. When some one has many friends, he can have support from various fields. You can able to organize various activities to enjoy with friends if you have more friend. You won't have more friends unless you don't want to make one. More friends are helpful to do your task easily. For instance, you want to go for a trip with your friends. But you have a few numbers of old friend who are busy with their work. In this case, if you have the willingness to make new one, you will able to arrange the trip seamlessly. Because you can able to find someone who wants to go a trip but you must have the interest to meet new one.
Secondly, making new friends will also help you to learn new things. Every person has a special expertise field and profound experienced. When you meet someone who has a unique skill than you, you can learn from him easily. Learning and gathering experience from a friend is a very effective way to be a expert on a field. Friends are always amiable on the case of sharing their knowledge. For example, during my university life, I always tried to make new friends of various department and it helped me to learn various thing quickly and efficiently. Most of the important parts of my experience is gathered by friends sharing knowledge. Now, I am good of programming because of my friends support and association.
In a sum, making new friends is a vital part of life, though some may think than old are always be like gold. But there is a possibility to lose your old friends for various reason. So, making new one will keep you with your friends all time.
- As early as the twelfth century A.D., the settlements of Chaco Canyon in New Mexico in the American Southwest were notable for their "great houses," massive stone buildings that contain hundreds of rooms and often stand three or four stories high. Archaeo 71
- TPO3- It is more important to keep your old friends than it is to make new friends. Agree or not? 60
- TPO-02 - Integrated Writing Task In many organizations, perhaps the best way to approach certain new projects is to assemble a group of people into a team. Having a team of people attack a project offers several advantages. 73
- As early as the twelfth century A.D., the settlements of Chaco Canyon in New Mexico in the American Southwest were notable for their "great houses," massive stone buildings that contain hundreds of rooms and often stand three or four stories high. Archaeo 71
- TPO 12 Integrated Writing (Jane Austin) 75
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 43, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...iends are very important and crucial to ones life. Without friends life will be mise...
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Line 3, column 222, Rule ID: ANY_BODY[1]
Message: Did you mean 'someone'?
Suggestion: someone
...ing hand and a place of happiness. When some one has many friends, he can have support f...
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Line 3, column 419, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
.... You wont have more friends unless you dont want to make one. More friends are help...
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Line 5, column 303, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
... a friend is a very effective way to be a expert on a field. Friends are always a...
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Line 7, column 97, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'been'.
Suggestion: been
...ough some may think than old are always be like gold. But there is a possibility t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, as to, for example, for instance, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 36.0 43.0788530466 84% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 52.1666666667 86% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1786.0 1977.66487455 90% => OK
No of words: 394.0 407.700716846 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.53299492386 4.8611393121 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.45527027702 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.38890065722 2.67179642975 89% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 212.727598566 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.444162436548 0.524837075471 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 536.4 618.680645161 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 28.0 20.6003584229 136% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.1344086022 70% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 24.1578567099 48.9658058833 49% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 63.7857142857 100.406767564 64% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.0714285714 20.6045352989 68% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.89285714286 5.45110844103 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 26.0 11.8709677419 219% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.386889830314 0.236089414692 164% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.13065559989 0.076458572812 171% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.093266332029 0.0737576698707 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.296746381091 0.150856017488 197% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0899173116331 0.0645574589148 139% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.9 11.7677419355 59% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 58.1214874552 128% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 10.1575268817 63% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.4 10.9000537634 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.45 8.01818996416 80% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 86.8835125448 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 10.002688172 50% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.0537634409 76% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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